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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2018 2:29 AM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

Oliver is an absolute savage in this chapter and fucking love it lol



Author's Response:

Thanks! He is certainly a fun character to write.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2017 11:45 AM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

It's interesting to see Sersei's emotional response to hear that Cam was swallowed by Cerys.  She almost seems to care that her only sibling has been killed.  Especially since she was instrumental in Cam being in put this position.  Sersei was the one who misled her brother about the pink wrist bands and always knew what would happen to Cam.  Maybe she was upset that Cerys simply overstepped her bounds, not that Cam was murdered.  Of course, she easily accepted that Oliver, a boy she actually liked, would probably be killed by Cerys, so I guess it’s no biggie.  After all, it’s not like they are people…



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We shall see soon enough, but until then, let's check in on Stan

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2017 10:41 AM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

In the immortal words of the Dread Pirate Wesley: "The Battle of Wits has begun!"

Author's Response:

Oliver is facing about the same kind of physical odds as the dread pirate when he's immobilized...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 11:13 PM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

I bet Sersei is so happy, maybe even trembling that she finally has Oliver. I mean, she has been waiting a long time for this moment. While Brooklyn and the other girls had their fun, all she could do was wait. She got so bored, she even checked in on Cam, just to remember what it's like. Then, she had the fear of losing Oliver to Edith and then out of nowhere she hears about Oliver and she almost denies it to be true. Sersei had waited, and now has her toy.

I don't think Oliver is the first person to question the Omega Pi ladies and their methods of capturing men. They dismiss his arguments as if it's the same old criticisms that they have been hearing for years. Oliver won't convince these women to change their methods. The tradition is too strong.

Are the wax models sex toys too? Or are they just souvenirs? Since they are the same size as the actuall person, they could also be used as a toy. You lose Oliver, now you can use his wax version. Oliver will definately be popular since he was the one to evade them and cause a frenzy in the house. All the girls know about Oliver, while most guys are only known to a few.

Oliver got a similar attitude to me when Sersei just smiled at him on her bed. She is goergeus. If you were to be used as a sex toy, this Omega Pi house is the place to be. It's amazing becuase Oliver is completely aware of what is going to happen to him for the next few days but he still had a moment where he could admire Sersei's body before she uses it against him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Right now I know a certain Tom who wishes he was an Oliver right about now. Sersei has had to wait and think of all the things she wanted to do with her little prize. Now the wait is over....

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 9:42 PM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

Ya know, from a certain stand point these psychos are freakin hilarious.  It’s like the Addams family played straight.  Just when you can’t imagine them being more vile...they show you that you can’t imagine enough. 

I find myself wondering how Edith know’s about Sersi’s visit to Grandma.  Is Sersi going to eventually be bothered that Edith is checking up on her?  Is grandma so cowed she just informs on herself?

The thing with the wax mold was creepy enough without the "this one will be very popular" comment.  What?  They collect and trade them?  "I'll give you three Bears for an Oliver."  "No way."

Weasel bait is in full greedy mode.  She who wants has gotten what I really hoped she’d never get to enjoy....did I mention I hate her?  I hope Oliver picked up some nasty skin condition from that damn jar of cream and Sersi itches for the rest of miserable existence.  Maybe warts. 

In spite of whatever happens next, Oliver has been awesome.  And I for one, have faith he will continue to be.  Up to know, he has been able to be somewhat uncompromising.  But compromise and ruthlessness can go hand in hand.  Now that he know’s there is no reason to hold back, what will our boy scout come up with? 

I really need to see  what happens next.  This just gets more and more intense Duggernaut.  Thanks.

pix



Author's Response:

Thought you might enjoy the continued defiance and the never give in attitude. He's knows he's up against it and refuses to buckle, the old bend but don't break mentality. Should be fun.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 9:14 PM Title: Sersei Claims her Prize

As much as I love Oliver calling the monsters out and asking them the hard questions, I wish he’d push a little more to the real point.  How many deaths is Edith responsible for?  If I remember correctly, she was one of the founders of the Omegas.  That makes every son taken blood on her hands.  Of course, Oliver doesn’t know the details of her life, how old she really is, but I’d still like for him to call her out.  How many sons have you taken, harvested and whose lives have ended at your hands? Murderers. 

 I’m glad to see Oliver thinking big picture.  He has to make the best of a bad situation.  Maybe cozying up to Sersei will extend his life a little.  It will be interesting to see his plan take shape.  Now for the update on Cam and his struggles and of course the recovering Stan as he regroups. 

So, finally mention of the wax impression and it’s use.  While Oliver speculates what it’s use may be for and recollects his discovery in Vesper’s office of the dozens of molds with the names of young men.  Vesper tells us that Oliver’s mold will be popular.  So they are not only a remembrance of the “harvest” of the poor victim, they are a collectable for the sisters.  Maybe to become a pendent for a necklace, ear rings or an ornament of sorts.  Sick and twisted, especially after the death of the victim.

God, I love this stuff!!

 



Author's Response:

While this is still new to Oliver we know these women have been practicing these rituals for a long long time. He isbstruggling to find purpose and a path to freedom while staring death in the eye. Next chapter Stan.

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