Date: August 28 2017 4:29 PM Title: A Test of Wills
Samantha tried to run away with Charlie. What she completely against what the sisterhood was doing, or did she just make an exception for that one man?
Samantha went to swoons over the years. Did she really believe in what she was doing, or did the sisterhood scare her into submission?
The magic affected Oliver, perhaps making him to Omega Pi what Paul Atreides and Leto II were to the Bene Gesserit. However, there hasn't been any mentioned of latent supernormal abilities. So in what way could Oliver be different?
Author's Response:
You make a couple of very interesting assertions - yes he was in utero during a swoon, and you're right, we've not seen anything of power from him...
Love the Dune reference - kwisatz haderach, hmmm
Date: August 25 2017 9:27 PM Title: A Test of Wills
Let's hope that Edith doesn't take Oliver's response "stick it in your ass" literally. That perspective might not be exactly what he had in mind...
Author's Response:
Right! Perhaps not the wisest epithet to hurl at a giant sized woman
[Report This]Date: August 24 2017 6:30 AM Title: A Test of Wills
I have to say that I like that Oliver thought of Cam, but this raises a most important question.
Does Edith’s story about Samantha confirm Cery’s story?
Not really. Again, all that is required is for Cerys to be privy to all this drama. And it doesn’t seem all that hard for her to be able to find out.
What good is it making an example of someone if nobody knows the story?
Cery’s knows the tale and used this knowledge when she “storied” Oliver and Cam.
And Samantha’s little man comments as she say's good bye to Oliver and thoughts about how Oliver was never her’s....as she’s on her way to feed on some poor soul...sure don’t inspire me to invest a lot of faith or hope in her. Maybe at one point she was worth putting your hopes on, but no more.
If Edith is telling the truth.
She said they usually let the fathers go...but the older / younger sibling question puts that in doubt. Cam had no memories, but had some photos. That seems to put a lie to her version of things.
Maybe she said that so that Oliver would believe that they would let Stan go.
Look how they fell on Stan when they thought they had a shot at him. They even knew he was with Samantha. Yet they were all ready to do something.
No, Edith is lying through her fangs and every guy in orbit about one these vile things is fair game.
Dang, Duggernaut. I think you’ve made me a little untrusting. Thanks again for your awesome work.
pix
Author's Response:
Pix please... these things have been doing this for how long? They certainly wouldn't let a little thing lime the truth get in the way. As for Cam pictures they could very well be the ones that came with the frame something to console a young fatherless child destined for the feeding trough at the Omega house. Regardless of the truth, right now Oliver is in a heap of trouble...😯
Date: August 24 2017 6:23 AM Title: A Test of Wills
Prediction: Samantha went against the sisterhood for love, and Oliver was influenced by the magic.
Author's Response:
Very astute and very accurate
[Report This]Date: August 24 2017 1:33 AM Title: A Test of Wills
awesome! Keep up the good work! Really loving how this is unfolding. I anticipate this story the most, more than any other one that gets regular updates.
Author's Response:
We'll thank you Captain i hope i am able to keep delivering an entertaining story!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2017 1:11 AM Title: A Test of Wills
Back to back amazing chapters! This one wasn't as plot defining as the last one, but it was surely entertaining.
This was the first time I even considered Edith Froth to be sexy. I never imagined her hot, just powerful and these ladies needed a leader who had more brains than beauty. But I guess Mrs Frost has the charm still in her.
I mean, the way she described taking Charlie and using him was awesome and I love it when they detail the moments as they enjoyed it. That was sexually cruel to Oliver, especially how she compared his dad's love as to Oliver's love to Sersei.
Vesper. She still is mysterious to me. How old is she? She is a milf like Mrs. Frost right? I hope so. We don't even know much about Vesper. I thought she was maybe Sersei hot, not Brooklyn hot. If Mrs Frost is that high on Vesper, I'm almost desperate to see her play with Oliver. She can flirt about his new "job" for her. He can do other things than help out her shop.
Looking at those options that Edith gave, the smother one is most likely, also it's the most sexy. Question is, which body part will they smother Oliver with?
That backstory was deep. Surprisingly made sense. They just capture and shrink the dudes that fuck their Omega Pi sisters. Then, they shrink the boys that result from that pregnancy. With each sister getting a child, the father and the son are gifts for the women.
Seriously, where do I sign up to fuck a hot girl, then shrink to be fucked by a bunch of hot girls that are also giantess and some are also smoking milfs. Then they never let you leave (except Cerys, ahem). A shrunken life in this house is the dream.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
If only... given the effects of taking the boys life energy it is hard to guess ages. In my mind Vesper is indeed that milf age and very attractive. You are right in that we've sort of set Brooklynn as the pinnacle for hotness with others slightly less than. Edith may be very old but she definitely knows how to play. Physically cruel is one thing but psychologically screwing Oliver's mind took it to another level. I already know if there was an address for their house you would camp out on their front lawn. 🤗
Date: August 23 2017 11:41 PM Title: A Test of Wills
Damned Omega bitches... You gotta love Oliver's resolve against overwhelming odds as he stands firm against the sadistic monsters. He calls them out for what they truly are. Unfortunately, as the hag said, she could torture him in any of a number of ways... tearing him slowly apart... a clothes iron... acid... crushing body parts with a pair of pliers… not good. As others have said, I don't think she will do these things... even if Oliver resists. I love Oliver calling the bitches out. The sisters have become so numb to what they do that they see nothing wrong with any of their crimes because in their eyes, their victims are never really people, they are a sacrifice yet to be made, an offering to whatever pagan deity they blindly worship and the life energy the sisters need to perpetuate the deception.
Pix brings up a great point that I hadn’t previously considered. Those sisters with one child have a first born male and the mother stops there with no other offspring. Where the first born is female as in the case of Sersei or Harmony, the brothers are a couple of years younger than their sisters. Given the dislike Edith has for (normally sized) Men in the lives of the sisters, this must mean that the siblings have different fathers who may have met the same end as Charlie.
I want to second the point made by a prior review... This story works so well because we genuinely care about the protagonists. Cam, Oliver and Stan are good, likeable people that have become victims to the most loathsome, Satan like creatures imaginable. They take on a pleasing form to lure in their prey. Their victims unaware of the smoke and mirrors until it is too late. There must be some way of taking this sick operation down. It’s up to Oliver to stay strong to protect and give a chance to Stan. In turn, Stan, Deacon and company (Samantha?) must put a plan together. If Stan has a heart to heart with Samantha, she might spill the Omega beans (as crazy as the story would sound). I could see a determined and armed Stan make his way back into the Omega house to take down Edith. Not that I condone violence, but exceptions sometimes need to be made…
Author's Response:
After that surgically precise delivery of Oliver's father's fate our boy stayed true and yep called them out on their BS. The question can he stay strong while they have their way with him? Or will he escape again and seek revenge on Cerys? Oliver has proven himself a challenge to these efficient killing machines. A few questions answered but still so many others asked. 🤔
[Report This]Date: August 23 2017 8:14 PM Title: A Test of Wills
Yeah! Old Frosty could do all those things. But, then again, that would deny the girls of the sorority their turn at Oliver. And, for some reason, I don't think even the grand-dame of Omega Pi can autocratically change her mind without repercussion from whatever higher power they venerate!
Author's Response:
Perhaps. She just decreed a change in the order of the claim at a whim though you raise an I teresykmg point. If Edith is number 2, who does she answer to?
[Report This]Date: August 23 2017 7:02 PM Title: A Test of Wills
I've been following this story for a while now, and I just realized I haven't reviewed! I made an account just for you ;).
First of all, I'd like to congratulate you for writing an absolute fucking masterpiece. This story is so goddamn good it gives me hope for the GTS fandom. The way you've managed to take an idea and give it a twist to make it feel original is well executed. You've started off on the right foot by making the characters ACTUALLY likable and ACTUALLY realistic. Props for that, too many stories have shit for plot, shit for characters. And the thing about that is, it prevents the reader from CARING about the character. You made me feel awful when Cam was eaten (please let him be alive somehow) because he is a likable, fun, realistic character. These characters feel real, and even though the situation you've put them in is purely fantasy, how they deal with it is realistic. Your main character, Oliver, started out a little bit bland but you fleshed him out easily with his guts, fighting skills, and also by showing his character through dialogue instead of text. It makes me want to see what he will do next and if he will survive. And god, you made these hot girls whom I was excited to see get in on some GTS action, EVIL as hell. It actually disgusted me when Brooklyn was fucking Cam, a feeling I haven't felt before from a GTS scene of that type.
All in all, you've set up an amazing base plot and lovable, and hatable, characters. I can't wait to see where you'll go with this story. Props for sticking with it this far and not leaving it unfinished, a story like this deserves an amazing ending. I would love to see an Attack on Titan like scene where Oliver uses his razor blade to fuck a chick up. It certainly wouldn't be out of character. In any case, thank you for giving me an amazing read!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much not only for taking the time to read this slowly unfolding drama but also for taking the time to make an account and share a review. I am humbled by your kind words of praise. I guess I write what I like and that means characters I can invest in either love or hate. Evolving characters under stressful situations makes me think what would I do if this shit was happening for real, some crack (Cam) and others excel. Yes these girls are smoking hot but oh so predatory and that's their lure to draw their quarry in. I think I'm going to have to stick with one until the end. Thanks again👍
[Report This]Date: August 23 2017 6:30 PM Title: A Test of Wills
Wow, did not see that coming.
So the dad’s usually live? Wait, do Cam and Sersi have the same father? Do Linus and Harmony?
Okay, I am totally with Oliver now, not that I wasn’t before. He delivers. This is the best stuff I’ve read. His defiance is freakin’ awesome! If the psycho harpies smash him in the next chapter, it’ll still be his victory.
And I'm kinda thinkin there aren't enough kinds of cancer to wish on Vesper.
You have really shown how awesome SM fiction can be Duggernaut. Thanks for raising the bar.
pix
Author's Response:
Maybe they live or maybe it's just a gaff to pull Oliver into revealing information. We know how that worked out for Cam... Oliver has definitely revealed he has a set of BALLS on him you didn't see early in the story. Thanks again for the praise!