Date: August 13 2017 6:43 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!
When it comes to Stan's fate, we've kind of been ignoring the elephant in the room. The abductions and ultimate disappearances of Omega sons works for only one reason. The biological father has been removed as a threat and the Omega mothers understand the process and look the other way knowing full well the fate of their sons. No police report or involvement exists because everyone that could cause trouble for the sisters is an accomplice to the crime (except of course the hapless victim). In the case of Oliver, yes, his biological father has disappeared, (another Omega victim?) the monkey wrench in the works is that Oliver has a surrogate father in Stan. Stan is concerned for Oliver’s wellbeing and therefore must be removed from the equation to maintain the status quo for the sisters. Stan's fate has always been sealed regarding Oliver. Take that Stan is also the son of an Omega that evaded the sisters due to the death of his mother and it's a done deal. The sisters must take Stan and Samantha has always known this. Perhaps this plot was the sister’s way of resolving a lost opportunity. Samantha is with Stan because he is the "one that got away" from the sisters. His relationship with Samantha is a sham and he has no idea…
[Report This]Date: August 10 2017 8:55 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!
WHOA! That has got to be the narrowest escape anyone has ever had from these girls. Stan definitely has GL-worthy will power.
P.S.---Happy 401st review, Dug!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2017 12:01 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!
Damn! Suspenseful chapter! With Stan as our POV character, you can smell the evil coming off the ‘Megs.
And he escaped their clutches! Stan is da’ man!
If this were just some action piece, this chapter wouldn’t amount to much for our side. But Viewed as a horror piece, this was a pretty awesome win for the good guys.
Stan knows there’s something extraordinary going on. He’ll know to be cautious when dealing with the harpy house. He’s seen how pretty they are, but after this, they won’t have a lot of luck using it to distract him. He knows to look up stairs. Since he’s concerned about poison, he’ll never drink anything they hand him. Plus, Edith mentioned Samantha, that should help him avoid the most dangerous pitfall in his path.
I am a bit concerned about how long Edith’s attack will affect him. Will he get back to Deacon and wind up tiny?
But then was it an attack? Was that all Stan’s danger sense going off so hard it made him ill? Or something else entirely?
So damn much awesome, but so damn many questions!
All I can say is: We’re not worthy! We’re not worthy!
Thanks Duggernaut.
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PS 400th review! Superfan!
Date: August 10 2017 8:58 AM Title: Stand and Deliver!
TS... It appears that mere mortal men can't stop these monsters. It's going to take someone on the inside to take action. Time for Cerys, Harmony and Samantha to do the right thing...
[Report This]Date: August 10 2017 1:31 AM Title: Stand and Deliver!
This chapter pissed me off. These girls are running a kidnapping sex slave dungeon and they want to call the police on Stan? For what, intruding?
It bothers me that if the police do show up, Stan is the one most likely to be arrested. I really felt for Stan. He just wants to see his little boy and they are lying through their teeth and he can sense it.
I also did not like angry side of Brooklyn. She just lost a sex toy and is complaining like she lost everything and is now taking her anger out on Stan.
Also, what kind of bs was that magic that Frost had? I mean, some magic is ok, but when they can use with ease, it just feels hopeless for the heroes to win. I was rooting for Stan, but a simple touch to the chest makes him weak.
It feels that the Omega Pi girls have too much power. Edith Frsot probably has other powers to, such as locating Oliver and stuff which makes and epic journey by Oliver, worthless.
You got to give me some hope to bank on Duggernaut. Deacon is weak, Stan been spelled, Cam and Oliver shrunk. None of these guys can handle one Omega Pi girl now.
It sure seems like it's all downhill and I wonder how will the story progress. I can't wait foe the next chapter!
Date: August 09 2017 6:15 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!
Well, that was interesting! So, the stories about Edith appear to be true. She seems to have abilities far greater than the sisters or Vesper. Stan's aggressiveness was no match for Edith's Jedi mind tricks. You have to love it, Edith was prepared to take Stan right then and there with a glass of good night juice and if his instincts hadn't motivated him to escape, we'd be reading about "little Stan". Edith did this all on her own without the weeping stones, without the alter and the rest of the girls chanting and looking on. She also did it without Stan's consent, where that was previously part of the ritual. The victims all unknowingly consenting to be taken. Now admittedly, she didn't harvest him, but it was close. I see Stan having a heart to heart with Deacon and company to strategize and learn more about the Omegas and possibly even attempt to discuss the sisters with Samantha as well. He knows there is something definitely wrong and he's not letting this go; especially with Oliver still missing. Great stuff as always, keep it coming!