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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 2:13 PM Title: Blonde Ambition

Brooklyn, take me! If you want a new toy to keep in your panties, I would be honored to be your toy and let you have your way with me forever. You could restrain me for hours like you said with Oliver and tie me up anyway you want. That way, you can keep me inside you all the time.

Man, Brooklyn is horny. One moment when Cam is gone and she misses the feeling of a tiny guy pressed up against her.

Shouting like it's an emergency! Ha! I admit, that's funny. Losing a tiny is Omega Pi's type of drama.

Oliver may have lost some ground on these girls, but now he has a new ally with Cery's. This should be a fun game of cat and mice.

Stan, the man, will this be his last stand? Honestly, I wouldn't mind him shrinking and be given to Samantha. I just don't really fear for Stan. In fact, I might consider him lucky that he might get small in front of these girls.

Maybe Cery's will sneak Oliver into Stan's pocket. Or Cery's will just take Oliver to Stan while they are away from the Omega Pi house. It sounds simple to reunite the two.

The questions is how will Oliver grow back? I really want Oliver to grow back and then knock on the Omega Pi house and when they open it, he says something clever. "Miss Me?" with a grin. I would relish that moment.

I would love Cery's to be that game changer. Restore Oliver and let Oliver march to the house with confidence. Also, Cery's should make Oliver take an antishrinking pill before he goes there of course.

Brooklyn sees Oliver "where's Cam!" She demanded.

"He's safe" Oliver smiled. Brooklyn made a face and looked at Oliver's crotch.

Oliver chuckled. "You girls are naughty. I would never think of that sort of thing. When I say he's safe, he is truly safe. Not safe as ....in there." Oliver notioning to Brooklyn's tight shorts.

Brroklyn strided over to Oliver and grabbed his collar and whispered. "If I woke up when you stole Cam from me, I would have gladly taken you instead. You would be quite a catch for my hungry pussy. Your little adventure would have ended and mine would just begin."

She looked at Oliver with her bright eyes locking his vision to her. "How would you like to live here?" she stepped back and stroked her panties with 2 fingers.

Oliver smiled. "I know something else that might." Oliver then touched his own pants.

Brooklyn scoffed. "One day Oliver.." she said as she walked back into the house.

"It's good to be back" Oliver exclaimed as he entered the house.
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I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 1:35 PM Title: Blonde Ambition

Stan wasted no time to get to the Omega Pi house.  He knows men are disappearing an needs to be cautious be he is supremely concerned for Oliver's safety.  Will he rush in or will he go fishing to see how these excuses for human beings respond.  He knows there is danger and I think he's smart enough to be careful.  If they do invite him in, for God's sake don't accept a beverage, otherwise we'll be talking about "little Stan". Imagine if Samantha we're to pay a visit to the house and was introduced to the reduced version of her husband...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 10:22 PM Title: Blonde Ambition

Hmmmm! Hopefully, Stan will be mollified by whatever explanation the OP's improvise. Or, at the very least, if he does become suspicious, I hope he's not so impulsive as to accuse them right then and there! I know it's your story, and all. But, I still think the very next chapter would be too soon to shrink him. Assuming, of course, that you had any plans in that direction when you first depicted him deciding to pay Oliver a surprise visit.

That somewhat mandatory bit of seriousness over with, let me conclude this review by saying that if Stan were Cameron's stepfather, rather than Oliver's, then I could almost guarantee that the OP's are about to give him...

...the Cam-shaft.*


*Wah-wah-wah-WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 7:27 PM Title: Blonde Ambition

Oliver's restraint is almost admirable...only because it is based on ignorance.  It's been pretty cool seeing Oliver get one over on them, but it looks like his streak of small victories is coming to an end.  They're getting wise to his depths and his tricks. 

I wonder what Brooklyn will think of Oliver now.  I like the moment of silence when they realized how vulnerable she was.  Very human. 

Since not a one of them is likable, I can't really praise their observation skills.  Allie's brain is functional, but not much use for anything worthwhile.  I hope Stan is up to the challenge she represents, though. 

Great timing Stan.  Do the good guys some good.

Nice work Duggernaut.  This is really getting tense.

pix

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