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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 10:10 PM Title: Brooklynn Under the Cover of Night

Lucky Oliver getting some time alone with Brooklyn without her knowing. If that was me, I would just stay down there, crawl into her panties and pretend to be Cam. She can roll on me as much as she wants.

Oliver probably is the only one who got to have fun with a giant girl while the girl doesn't have fun with him. Oliver did what he wanted, teasing Brooklyn like that. I bet Brooklyn wants some payment for that touching she received.

The door with no towel just has to be a trap. I mean, Sersei is asking everyone to clog up that space.....unless.... it's her own door. My goodness, is that Sersei's room? This should be interesting!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 9:54 PM Title: Brooklynn Under the Cover of Night

Gak!  Going back for the blade was the right choice.  But DANG! 

I'm really hoping a bit of rest will let us see a side of Cam that contributes to their escape.  I really hope Go Oliver becomes Go Cam and Oliver!

Oliver must realize that he can't just count on outside help.  His circumstance is too beyond comprehension.  Otherwise, he'd lay low and wait, Cam would get help if/when he could.  But no, he sees immediate action (and risk) is required. 

What a chapter Duggernaut!

 

pix

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 7:26 PM Title: Brooklynn Under the Cover of Night

Whoa! This chapter was definitely your most suspenseful one, yet. All that was missing was the simulated burning fuse from the original MISSION: IMPOSSIBLE series!*

* "Bump! Bump-bump-BUMP!
Bump-Bump-bump! Bump!"

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