[Report This]Date: June 15 2017 9:00 PM Title: Back in Brooklynn
What was that sound? I heard it all the way out here. I think it was TomSpeedy gasping when Brooklyn said she wanted Deacon. (This is me giving you a thumbs up pal.)
Well, this is not a victory for Oliver. Not only does he have to sit and watch that big, vanity machine abuse his friend, but she got to him.
He might figure it out on his own, but if the chance to confer with Cam ever comes he’s going to figure out that both of them don’t have their real dads. He’s had his body and soul violated for the objective of this little gang of slimeys. But how is he going to feel when he figures out he’s never met his real father because of these people. He might remember his feelings at this moment and have a wave of nausea pass through him.
I have to say, Oliver is probably safe on the chicken front. I mean, can you imagine the conversation that would lead to Brooklyn talking about the missing chicken? “Ya know, I was sure I put down some bit of chicken...and then it was gone...crazy huh?” This is a house full of chatty types....Sersi has a ton of little details being tossed around her ...for her to focus on that one....maybe...food, water, concealment...she knows what his primary needs are. If that happens, It doesn’t look like Oliver’s hiding spot is good enough. Phew!
Thank you, Duggernaut. Love your work.
pix
Author's Response:
Thanks Pix, always appreciate the tremendous investiture readers make into the story and the feedback certainly inpsires to keep the story coming.
Date: June 15 2017 5:27 PM Title: Back in Brooklynn
Poor Cam… will he ever get something to eat besides Brooklynn? Oliver needs to be a bit more careful. If our health queen had opened her eyes at an inopportune time he would have been seen. I believe that the sisters have underestimated Deacon, especially if he works in conjunction with Cady. I think Cady will add her experience and perspective to help Deacon uncover the truth. Additionally, it won't be long until Stan is alerted and comes into the picture. I’d love to see Stan push back hard against Oliver’s mother, demanding know the truth. I think the sisters are in for more than they bargained for. Things are about to unravel for the Omegas and the pace will quicken.
Author's Response:
Quite possiblity this whole thing might come to light. I mean its not like they've been doing this for years and years without getting caught. Right?
[Report This]Date: June 14 2017 7:06 PM Title: Back in Brooklynn
P.S.---six hundred and sixty-nine reviews to go until another Big One-Triple-Oh.
:-)
Author's Response:
Sooooo cloooooose
[Report This]Date: June 14 2017 7:05 PM Title: Back in Brooklynn
Oliver's reaction reminds me of that old Merle Travis song (satirizing the even older Lucky Strike cigarette slogan):
"So round; so firm; so fully packed."
[Report This]Date: June 14 2017 5:46 PM Title: Back in Brooklynn
I forgot how much I missed Brooklyn. She is just so hot! The way she plays with him and teases him and there is nothing for Cam to do is awesome.
Oliver, if you hand yourself over, that's what you will experience. Tempting, right? If I was you, I would surrender, but it's a good thing you are not me, otherwise this adventure would be rather short.
I thought that chicken was on the floor, and that's why Oliver found it. Since it was on the desk, Oliver should have suspected it was for Cam. I'm glad that Brooklyn didn't notice. She is too interested in Cam.
Another quick note. I like how Brooklyn wants Deacon. I'm just thinking of Brooklyn loving the feeling of trapping Deacon and Deacon is too stunned by her beauty to escape.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Imagine if Brooklynn got Miss Harwood as a teacher? What stories they could share. :)