[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 12:24 AM Title: I Heart Brooklynn
This story has had me on the edge of my seat for like the past 10 chapters! I want so badly to read more at the end of each chapter! Your driving me insane! Lol.. Anyway, this is a great story, I'm loving it this far. Keep on writing it! You've got me checking almost daily for updates. Really exciting, i can't wait to see where you are taking this. Great stuff man! You know, you should be a director or something!
Author's Response:
Thanks Jackdaw, I appreciate the nod. I'm trying to extend the chapters a little to give them a little more meat. I've been updating this story pretty frequently too. It's gonna get interesting real soon...
[Report This]Date: June 10 2017 10:29 PM Title: I Heart Brooklynn
Wow, there's so much going on here....and it's just a text exchange and two people talking in a room....wow. Sexy, frightening, curious and paranoid, what a complex scene. And still damn fun.
Deacon needs to recover from the navel lint response. He's gotta keep his off kilter feelings hidden. Though, odds are Sersi's ego will just laugh it off as an "in joke."
We haven't seen any shrunken objects yet. I wonder if they could shrink Deacon's guitar.
But wow! Who saw Deacon holding out and up so well? Never would have guessed it.
This was a great read Duggernaut. Thanks for your excellent work.
pix
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks for the appreciative nod. Deacon is onto something, he just doeesn't know what or how deep this thing might go. Would he have been so stout if not for Cady's warning?
Date: June 10 2017 8:28 PM Title: I Heart Brooklynn
It's nice to see that Deacon was perceptive enough to recognize that Oliver was not the person texting him. He knows that something is up with the Omegas but obviously has no clue as to the scope. His Spidey senses were also spot on with Brooklynn. He knows the sisters are feeling him out (so to speak), testing him, observing how he responds and seeing what he knows. I have to give props to Duggernaut regarding Brooklynn's response to Deacon's question about knowing Oliver's prior roommate. "A little". Ha! Definitely an accurate statement about the disposition of Cam and all of the other victims of the Omegas! Keep the good stuff coming!
Author's Response:
His perceptions are astute but again who would ever conceive of what our little darlings are up to, right? They all seem to love playing the double entendre games with cheeky little comments.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2017 4:23 PM Title: I Heart Brooklynn
Hmm. Needed more flirting and physical contact from Brooklyn.
Deacon was seduced, but I'm glad he felt soemthing was off.
I was expecting Deacon to hold an action figure and Brooklyn goes berserk thinking it's a tiny person. Lol!
I guess Deacon is going to go spying soon. (I wonder what he gets caught by the girls at the house.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
could be a LITTLE dangerous to get caught peeping on the omega girls...
[Report This]Date: June 10 2017 12:31 PM Title: I Heart Brooklynn
"Sweet?!" Yeah, right.
About as sweet as an almond cookie...laced with cyanide.*
*Jodie Foster movie reference.
Author's Response:
It could be very sweet... but it'd pack a bit of a kick