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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2017 6:27 AM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

     Yep.  You nailed them @Shrinkmeister.  If you’d like to nail them some more, I can lend you a hammer, any time.
      One of the things that makes them so delightfully loathsome is the contrast between how the look on the outside and how utterly disgusting they are on the inside.  In a sense you have to (not admire) acknowledge the skill it takes to hide their vileness.

     Of course, they only hide it so well.  The girls that Oliver saw avoiding them on the campus tell us volumes.  To know them is to avoid them.  That must be why they are so into their form of sex.  Real intimacy can be revealing and they have to avoid that.  Of course, with time they acquire the skills to hide the fact that they are really a well stacked pile of sewage and can pretend to be wives and mothers...for a while.
     The natural outcome would be to have them appear on the outside as they are on the inside, but what about if some karmic accident made them smell in a way that revealed the truth of their souls. 
     It would be called “The Mega Pew House.”....hahhahaha.

 

     pix

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2017 10:51 PM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

If the sisters were being completely honest with each other, their conversation might go something like…

Getting to her feet, Brooklynn nodded, “Okay,” she said, grasping the thick polished bannister and taking a step down.

“Are you going downstairs?” Sersei inquired.

Brooklynn nodded, “To see Kandi and collect your brother,” she answered.

“My brother?” Sersei paused for a moment.

“You remember, Cam.” Brooklynn explained, “We lied to him, drugged him, kidnapped him, robbed him of is future and have been molesting and sexually abusing. him ever since.  We’ve even begun depriving him of food lately.  I’m guessing he has less than a week to live.”

Sersei seemed confused for a moment, “Aren’t those things you are doing crimes?  I mean, we could go to jail for a long time if we were somehow caught, right?”

Brooklynn then reassured her Omega sister, “It’s ok, we’re Omegas, right?  We can do anything we went.”

Sersei grinned, “Ah, I see then, have fun,” she responded, comprehending the situation and walking down the wide set of stairs with Brooklynn on her heels.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 9:04 PM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

Nice seeing that Brooklynn had the common sense to feed poor battered and bruised Cam before she subjects him to more human dildo abuse.  OK... The moment has arrived.  While Brooklynn has shuffled off to round up some grubb Oliver will have a brief opportunity to chat with Cam since his abduction. Go Oliver...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 7:35 PM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

Okay, first of all? I applaud your choice of chapter title. I first heard that song in OUT FOR JUSTICE. So, I've associated it with Steven Seagal, ever since. And that, in turn, means I don't mind so much that you didn't use _my_ pun (lol!).

Secondly; it's nice to see that Brooklynn is going to let Cam rest, recuperate, and replenish before she has her way with him. You might say that he (ahem!) "dodged" the bullet in that regard.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 5:42 PM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

And now Cam unintentionally gave Oliver a chance to meet him.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 5:40 PM Title: No Sleep Till Brooklynn

Hmm. I guess Kandi isn't as nice as I thought. I think I'm sticking with my pick of Brooklyn for my favorite giantess at the moment. Vesper keeps catching my eye, but she hasn't stuck around lately.

Sersei really has underestimated Oliver. She thought he was like every other guy that would fall for the tricks. Well, I think Oliver has to thank Cam for making him paranoid which helped Oliver escape in the first place.

Did Brooklyn just remove the towel when she left...? She must be distracted by Cam that she forgot about the search for Oliver. But what I wonder is if Cam faked his hunger and decides to escape.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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