Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 6:38 AM Title: Parting is Such Sweet Sticky Sorrow

Now @Carycomic, just because he hasn't doesn't mean he won't. 

I can see the chapter now...(warning: much pandering to follow.)

Singing With Cadence.

     I can see it now.  Deacon hooks up with Cadence, only because we’re in a different reality this Cadence is nice..well, nicer.  When they go to Deke’s room for his performance, they catch Brooklyn and Kandace and a bunch of the others, moving out Oliver’s stuff.
    “What are you doing?” Deacon asks, “where’s Oliver?”
    “Uh...Oliver has gone in for gender-reassignment...” Brooklyn fibs, “He’s..uh .. she’s going to be an Omega Pi and move in with us...”
    “Why am I doubting your story?” Deacon asks.
    Caught red handed, they try to shrink the pair, but Cadence steps in front of Deacon and all the ‘Megs are suddenly tiny.
    “What did you do?” Shouts Deacon....staring at tiny Brooklyn.
    “I didn’t do anything....”Cadence grins, “they did.  I just reflected it back.”
    They gather up the evil tinies and interrogate them...they promptly sing like birds...for Cadence.  (Get it?)  Whereupon she calls her friend ...the less mean Faith...and they head over to the house of Pi. 
    “Yes?” Sersi asks, answering the door.
    “First.” Cadence begins, “why are these weasels following you?  And second where is Deacon’s friend Oliver?”
    “Right through here...” Sersi begins, and tries to shrink everyone....only to have it bounce and make her 3 inches tall.  “How did you do that?” She yells.
    Cadence and Faith only look at each other and giggle.  Because, you know, they’re being mysterious.  Then, they scoop up Sersi, just as the weasels close in (dammit!)
    Once in, Deacon calls out for Oliver while the girls shrink every ‘Meg they encounter.  Oliver show’s up bearing a tiny, improvised grenade launcher, a bunch of nutrition bar pieces, a tiny bottle of vodka, an improvised crow bar , 100 feet of rope and a tiny portable computer playing “raiders of the lost ark.”  He also has Cam and they’re both wearing ninja suits made from scaps of panties. 
    “Wazzup?” he asks Deke, casually. 
    “Me an my super powered girlfriend are rescuing you...” He says proudly.
    Oliver and Cam look at each other and shrug.
    “I guess we could do it that way. “ Oliver concedes.
    “But our plan involved explosions.” Cam quips.
    Once they baddies are gathered by two girls younger than all of them,they realize they have to restore the guys.  That proves to be a tough one, so they call Faith’s mom.  She shrugs and undoes all the damage the weeping stone has caused.  Then she asks “What are you going to do with all the tinies?”
    Everyone shrugs.
    “Share with your sister.” She orders.
    “Awww mom.”
    In this reality Julie got all the mean for the family.   So, thinking they are being clever, they decide to dice for them.  Julie only gets a ‘Meg if the di rolls a 1.
    However, it seems that the di come up a 1 for everyone, except Brooklyn and Harmony (since you all seem to like her, I don’t know why.)
    Faith keeps Harmony nice and safe...mostly.  Occasionally letting Josh and Julien have a go at her while she watches.
    Deke learns a valuable lesson about choosing a girl just for her surface.  Plus when he says that the shrinking thing looks kinda fun.  Cadence lets him screw Brooklyn while they’re both in her panties. 
    Meanwhile...and i do mean “mean”...this version of Julie opens the cage for Mr Chompers ...her pet weasel.

Author's Response:

Interesting crossover. imagine two group of unrelated shrinkers battling each other. could make for an interesting story somewhere down the road.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 9:45 PM Title: Parting is Such Sweet Sticky Sorrow

Cam alwasy struck me as a pretty healthy guy.  I goes to show what a diet of yoghurt and grooze gets you. 

Actually we're getting kinda past the "what a way to go" jokes...Cam doesn't seem to have a lot left in him.  Poor guy.  The 2nd most likable guy in the story (maybe tied with Stan) and he looks like he's on the ropes.  I hope the pile of weasle munchies is good and embarrassed by his state. 

Not gonna be swayed by relativism by the way...because Cerys is horrible, doesn't make any of the others one bit better.

Of course...it could all be a con....Cerys is actually rescuing tiny guys...she only says she eats them to cover her tracks...I'm sure she's a real sweetheart. 

Another good one Duggernaut.  Still rockin the writing.

pix

Author's Response:

He has been absolutely depleted by the girls and it hasn't even been a week yet.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 8:25 PM Title: Parting is Such Sweet Sticky Sorrow

Hmm. Kandi or Brooklyn. Me: obviously Brooklyn. She loves to be fit and exercise with Cam riding in her panties. Also, Brooklyn just acts like a girl who is a 10. Goes running, wears sporty outfits and loves to have a cute sex toy with her. Also, she is really friendly with people when she talks.

I love that description of Cam's limbs being glued together by Kandi's sticky fluids. Imagine if all drying and Cam is stuck on her pussy.

I can't wait for Brooklyn and the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think in all fairness you would have to experience both before committing to one.