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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 9:57 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

All this talk of Oliver's complexion...are we gonna call this the "spa-liver" scene?



Author's Response:

Where is he soft - All Over - say it fast, its funnier that way

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 8:26 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

Good job Oliver...and right under their noses too... Ha!  The next two events coming up are Deacon's and eventually Stan's involvement in the hunt for the now silky smooth Oliver and of course meeting up with his old roomy Cam.  After Kandi washes off all the remnants of her last escapade with Cam, she will hand him off to Brooklynn.  Is it possible that Oliver might be able to rescue Cam from panty prison while Brooklynn slumbers? I'll be staying tuned for the next exciting chapter...



Author's Response:

Anything and everything are possible as our intrepid adventurer continues to defy overwhelming odds

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 1:13 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

Clever!

And Oliver is going to have the most radiant skin ever.



Author's Response:

Hopefully he doesn't glow...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 11:35 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

Oh my freakin' god!

You could not get the grin off my face with a razor blade.

Olver is the best character in SM ever! 

Of course we gotta give some credit to that Duggernaut guy.  I hear he gave Oliver some good advice once.  Might've stuck.

Now I'm gonna read it again.

Thanks Duggernaut...just...thanks.

 

Pix



Author's Response:

Thanks! Oliver is a young man of hidden talents

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 9:25 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

Now Oliver has a story.

Oliver approaches Sersei. Sersei looks around the floor and finds him. "There you are!" She exclaims and grabs him. Oliver is smiling in her hand.

"Why are you so happy, is it becuase of me?" Sersei asked.

"No. I just bored hiding and dissapointed that you and all these girls couldn't find me. I once stood next to an action figure and you didn't even notice. It was at that moment that I figured out that I'm smarter than all of you".

"Oh really? Becuase now I caught you and I win, not you Oliver." Sersei fired back.

"Perhaps, but I bet it wouldn't be hard to escape, now would it" Oliver grinned.

Sersei's face glowed red, she was embrassed. Oliver did evade her and the girls but she did not expect it to be the result of her careless searching. But now that she had him, she would like to see Oliver run from her again.

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Ha! I hope Oliver escapes and becomes big, but if he doesn't, I hope he has a moment to rub his cleverness in their faces.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Kind of the ultimate FU. Your analogy reminds me in a roundabout way of the scene between Dennis Hopper and Christiopher Walken in True Romance.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 5:54 PM Title: A Fox in the Hen House

OK! First off? I apologize for the bad (first) pun in my review of the preceding chapter. Which is something I _never_ do, as a rule!

Secondly? Way to go, Oliver!! Once again, he manages to out-think the enemy by thinking like them. Just like the cast-aways of LOTG.

I can't wait to see what nearly happens to him in the next chapter. :-)

Author's Response:

I just may have to try and watch that movie!

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