[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 4:41 PM Title: Tightening the Noose
I may be missing something, but with all this lockdown business, did anyone clear out Oliver’s room. Plus, Deacon was never doped, how are they going to get this past him?
All this chit chat with the ‘Megs has them almost sounding like human beings, but good ‘ol Cam shows up at the end to remind us what they really are.
All this could still lead to Oliver seeing, or even rescuing Cam. Movie quotes, pot jokes and finding every way to call ol’ “weasel chow” a bitch would be a winning turn. Of course, Cam might not be in a joking mood, that tiny prison shank joke might not seem so funny to someone waking up wondering why their neck is wet and kinda hurts. Just think of the edge a tiny person could put on a blade; it’d go through someone’s skin like butter and they might not even feel it.
Honestly, as satisfying as something like that might seem, it doesn’t feel right for the characters. Oliver and Cam should remain the moral, likable gentlemen we have seen so far, at least not until the 'Megs start talking about making Deacon or even Stan “go away.” Then the lessons every cowboy learns about killing animals might just come to the forefront of Oliver’s mind. Kinda’ wonder how many they could get in one night. Would that release the stolen energy back to them?
Aaaaannnd other cheery thoughts from the Sersi fan club.
Thanks Duggernaut. A great way to up the tension and make the situation Oliver is in clear. You have made a chapter that could have been completely “utilitarian” an interesting view on character and just damn entertaining.
Peace
pix
Author's Response:
Thanks Pix,
Oliver's room has yet to be touched. Even with just his little piece of razor, you're right Oliver could inflict some serious hurt, but as you've stated, he's probably too much of a gentleman for that. Probably at first, who knows if he winds up spending any time getting a little more intimate with the lovely darlings of Omega Pi
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 6:21 AM Title: Tightening the Noose
@Tom Speedy: come to think of it; if this sorority was a den of 40 thieves? She'd probably be called "Allie Babette!"
Author's Response:
But if it was only thirteen would it be a baker's coven?
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 6:19 AM Title: Tightening the Noose
@Tom Speedy: Allie was introduced in chapter 14.
Author's Response:
Yep, the current president of the chapter house
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 4:15 AM Title: Tightening the Noose
Haha! They need all these girls to find Oliver! How does it feel to get outsmarted?!! Outplayed by one dude who is tiny! Man, I love cheering for Oliver.
Who is this Allie woman? She sounds like she is in charge, but I must have forgotten her.
Oliver's little blade gives me an idea. What if he makes an door that blends in with a wall? So from a normal sized person, they see just a wall, but when using a magnifying glass, they can see a small cut in the wall to see where the door is. Point is, they won't see the door.
Oliver can create a path from the Omega Pi house to the science lab. Then he can get chemicals and armor and make him giant resistant. Imagine clothes that shock people if they touch you. Electric armor. Spiky armor. Or even jelly armor. So slimy, they can't get a grip. Then Oliver can fight these girls without worry.
Next, Oliver can rescue all the tiny guys trapped in the house, bring them back to the lab using the door tunnel and soon, all the tiny guys are free and have armor and soon we will have a battle! Tiny guys vs sexy giantess girls!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
At least he's managed to craft himself some tools, so who knows how he might employ them. the notion of turning him into a little energized shocker might work in reverse though...
[Report This]Date: May 10 2017 6:36 PM Title: Tightening the Noose
This is going to be my most disgusting pun, yet (in more ways than one). I just can't resist saying it, though.
"Kandi is dandy. But, now, Cam will be licked by her quicker."
Author's Response:
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