[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 9:07 AM Title: Rambling Man, Gambling Man
Really? Brooklynn? Hmmm...might lead to a chance to trade notes with Cam. Eventually.
Oh, and go along girl is sure helpful....if you’re the walking bag of weasel chow! I knew it!
Oliver is taking some calculated risks....he’s in a really big cage at this point, so his options are limited. But so far his risks are paying off. Losing his water source is going to be a problem, but his new roomie is a health nut...lots of exercise means lots of showers....could work out for him. Maybe she’s a bit of a slob too.
Nice near misses and scrapes (literally) in this one Duggernaut. You are really creating something that would be impossible to put down if it were in book form. Superior stuff, in every way.
Peace
Pix
Author's Response:
Trying to keep the action palpable, so thick you could cut it with a homemade shiv made from a disposable razor.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 1:53 AM Title: Rambling Man, Gambling Man
If I was Oliver, I would just admire Brooklyn and think maybe its time for me to get caught. Get Brooklyn to play with me, and then she can give me to Sersei and stuff.
However..... since it's not me and it's Oliver, I want him to remain free of these girls as possible. We get so many instances where these girls catch the guy, but I feel like I want to break this wheel or this system. I want Oliver to show these girls how it's done.
Good thinking by Oliver. Stay in a room that has been already searched. That will at least buy him lots of time.
Two chapters in a row, Deacon has been mentioned. Will he get a chapter soon? Would love to see him just walk to the Omega Pi house, ask for Oliver and we will see what goes from there.
Maybe Deacon will be the beacon for Oliver.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Right? Brooklynn is really a magnificent giantess, physically, just gorgeous, but now we know the omega secret, there is something not quite as pretty on the inside. Have faith in good old deacon, his time is coming
Date: May 05 2017 10:56 PM Title: Rambling Man, Gambling Man
Oliver's game of cat and mouse continues...move and counter move in this chess match with his life on the line. It’s great seeing him match wits with Sersei and the rest. Is it possible that he might meet up with a caged Cam at some point as the sisters all seem to be so busy?
The apparent common knowledge and casual attitude that the sisters take regarding Cerys' habit of ending the lives of reduced men never fails to astound me. Sersei, knowing full well that Cerys has a penchant for murder, happily deceives both Cam and Oliver and practically signs their death warrants. All of this to her own brother and a guy she actually kind of likes. Brutal...
Author's Response:
It's is about to get kicked up a notch though and I think it's fair to say that Oliver is at a little disadvantage
[Report This]Date: May 05 2017 8:52 PM Title: Rambling Man, Gambling Man
To paraphrase Sonny and Cher: "And the game goes on!"
Author's Response:
The game, the beat, reminds me of the The Kings - Switch into Glide, on and on and on