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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 9:36 AM Title: Sersei the Persistent

Whew! This is quite a "twist" to Oliver's story.

Author's Response:

Nice Dickensian reference 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:45 PM Title: Sersei the Persistent

Gee Sersei...isn't kinda late?  Vision getting blurry?  Feeling tired?  You should rest...never mind the dream about the weasels.....rest...sleeeeep.

 

I might mention it's a big house.  Lots of places to miss.  And Oliver...he's resourceful.  And really, does she deserve even the slightest taste of victory ...does she deserve anything but a bunch of weasel bites?

Loving the chess game Duggernaut.  God this is good.

 

Pix



Author's Response:

You will Oliver step up his game as the girls close in. Should be fun

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:27 PM Title: Sersei the Persistent

Well, there is one exit for normal sized humans. But maybe not for tiny humans. Oliver can easily outsmart these girls by finding new spaces to hide in and maybe find a little crack or tunnel to travel into.

These Omega Pi houses must be ancient. Surely so wear and tear must have happened during the years. All their money probably went to shrinking magic, sexy clothes, and custom dildos.

I wish I had a sexy girlfriend like Sersei. The way she wants him so bad just makes me jealous of Oliver. Even her "fun" sounds erotic. Just imagine the hottest girl in school wanting you so much that she decides to trap you and asks other hot girls to assist her in finding you. Then you decide to avoid her becuase you want her to trap you again and eventually she gets you and you let her have her way with you. Dreams of being single.

I want Oliver to run free, but I also want Sersei to have her fun. I know a solution! There is a tiny guy named Tom running around and Sersei mistakes him for Oliver and she keeps him as her plaything. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There are a ton of places to hide but when there are so many hunting for you it gets harder and harder. I think if there was an omega house on your campus you might be inclined to let one of those girls put a band or two on you Tom. The would then become how hard would you hide? :)

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 7:03 PM Title: Sersei the Persistent

Oliver's freedom appears to be coming to an end.  Oliver's quick thinking is going to have to be a step ahead of Sersei to avoid panty prison and that sticky feeling like you haven't showered in a few days. Is there a ventilator shaft somewhere?  I guess there are positives and negatives to keeping his freedom or getting caught.  On the caught side there is geing fed... But also being fed to Cerys.  Then there's that smell you just can't quite wash off... Hmmm... I'd lean to the side of keeping my freedom...



Author's Response:

Again you're astute in your observations. Time does not appear to be an ally for Oliver as the girls become more dogged in their search for him. Tick tock.  Who fids him first? Sersei or Cerys? Some one else like Harmony?

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 5:23 PM Title: Sersei the Persistent

I know I'm rooting for Oliver to win out in the in, but that doesn't mean I don't want Sersei to catch him and have a little fun with him first. She's just such a great character, and so tantalizingly sweet in hding her cold, malefacent interior.



Author's Response:

Right? Sersei is basically just a lonely girl with a big heart. No wait... 

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