[Report This]Date: April 20 2017 7:51 AM Title: Dilemma
Dear Pixl8ed:
In the immortal words of Shrinkmeister...
"...it's just a story."
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 10:14 PM Title: Dilemma
Hrrrmmm. Nope. Not buying it.
All Harmony is doing is lying to herself. "Gosh, you have a consience because you feel bad. Now you can masterbate to your bad feelings and still be a good person."
She's managing to simulate being the token "not as evil creature" at the party. That isn't much of a thing to pin your hopes to.
I refuse to put one ounce of faith into any one of these campus critters. Any one who wants to can waste their hopes on this little "go along girl" but when push comes to shove, there ain't much there.
Okay, maybe there's a glimmer there. But I aint bettin' on it. And dammit, someone has to say, so I can be right when she lets us down.
Have I mentioned a certain disdain for anyone in that miserable group?
Truth be told, a really great read. Thanks Duggernaut, you are a way better author than we deserve.
Peace,
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Lol, not buying? Maybe I'm not selling... :)
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 9:01 PM Title: Dilemma
Ok, so the life energy makes the guys shrink and the women horny. I like it.
Also, this energy makes each girl remember the tiny guy constantly so the guys are like drugs to these girls. The girls really, really want their tiny guys.
I'm not sure how the shower acted like a catalyst to making Harmony orgasm and get wet all of a sudden. Must be the magic.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Not only does the stolen life force enervate our group of lovilies, it makes them very very, how do i say this nicely, as randy as a rabbit in heat. :)
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 7:02 PM Title: Dilemma
I would say that Harmony's moral compass is (for the moment, anyway) pointing more straightly than her mother's.
Author's Response:
So it would seem, though I do sense there is some degree of conflict in her young mind, or a failing of the flesh
Date: April 19 2017 6:47 PM Title: Dilemma
What is this? Harmony's mother is a complete failure. She raised a daughter with a moral compass! Harmony loves her brother and actually feels guilt for what was done to Oliver. Will Harmony find Oliver and help him? Could she turn to someone outside the Omegas? Stan maybe? He will be paying the sisters a visit in the coming days...
I think we are just beginning to see the horrors and depravity that the sisters are capable of. One possible scenario I envision: After Oliver does not return, Deacon sends his movie quote text message to Oliver’s phone. The sister with Oliver’s phone doesn’t know what to do or how to respond. Out of the need to protect the sister’s terrible secrets, Vesper or Edith demand to know how to respond to the message. Oliver refuses to help them and who knows what these sick bitches will resort to get what they want? Torture, starvation, the removal of limbs? Who knows?
Great work as always... More please
Author's Response:
Is there a chance Oliver might find an ally? How would he know? As for Vesper or Edith, they have to catch him first...