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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 4:14 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

The pleasure is ours sir... A totally engrossing story... Thank you!



Author's Response:

Just for that, here's a new chapter! :)

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 11:59 AM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

Pix... I agree completely about the black widow theory.  The men in the lives of Omegas are there for one purpose... Fathering sons to feed the sisters needs. Once that job is out of the way, men are just an impediment and would ask too many questions when their sons mysteriously disappear. The question is whether they left or were disposed... Perhaps fed into the Omegas clutches... This leads to the next question.  Deacon will tell Stan about the conversation he had with Oliver about his possible disappearance. Stan will not let this go and will be nosing around Omega house looking for Oliver.  This will be interesting... What fate awaits Stan?



Author's Response:

You were on this thread a while back with Mudd's Women but you've delved a little deeper and posed some very intriguing questions. Things have been put into play due to Deacon and Oliver's little code and you are absolutely right to presume Stan won't let it go.

I appreciate your investiture in this story because now things just got a lot.more interesting. 

;)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 4:23 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

         Ya’ know Shrinkmeister, we’re only thinking of the poor young men, destroyed at the beginning of their adult life. You notice how both Cam on Oliver have no biological dads?  There’s a whole “black widow” thing going on too I think.Which puts Stan in their sights too, well, everybody really.  They make a big deal about “selected sons”  but that doesn’t really eliminate anybody.   I mean who did they use for the first rituals?   Didn’t have selected sons before they had an organization.
          Hmmm....they don’t seem to mind girls for sex. And they don’t go out of their way to be nice to girls who ain’t “in the club.” Remember the two girls who avoided the 'Megs when Oliver toured the campus at the beginning of the story?   There might even be a percentage tiny women getting the 'Megs “special attention.”  Usually,as an SW fan, that’s a fun concept...but with these monsters....ugn..no. I picture one of them shrinking a gal and keeping her “just to prove she can be gentle”....until she gets bored and eats her.
     It looks like they a don’t target kids...well...while they’re kids....no...their little things with young Oliver and Vesper’s boy...I mean they wait until they have all their energy to get’em. But you can see them swimming around the youngsters like sharks, thinking....soon....Just evil.
      The thing Oliver’s mom is attending...there are no real details, only the “other sister’s progeny” it might even be a girl that thought she could pick her own path though life, that would be sad.
    Year after year,generation after generation these vile things justify their actions and dine on people like Oliver and Cam...just reprehensible.

     And I’m feeling very pessimistic about Oliver’s escape attempt. The next chapter could begin with him injuring himself...though I’ve made and arguement why that isn’t logical in the shower scene comment...or it might begin with him landing in some bitch’s hand...that’d suck.  Or he’ll scurry around the chamber floor until he’s spotted,making his efforts useless.  Or, maybe he gets found by, I dunno...Harmony.  Who knows she’ll never get her shot otherwise.  But, yeah, Harmony, who gave a hint of living on the same planet as a human being with her “aren’t they still people?" comment, but a little peer pressure from Sersi and...what does this make?  Her second...third victim?  Yeah,that's a conversation for the ages...you were delicious...now how can I help?  Ha.
       Unless she didn't partake.  That would mean she’s not under the influence of the “swoon” thus able to act...but can you imagine one of these things, raised as they were. Not liking the idea of their values being “washed away.”  When they could simply join the vampiric cow brigader?  One of these critters?  I guess it could happen...if you're more of a romantic than me.  And what is a giant, naked girl with no stolen energy going to do?  Hide him in her.....mouth?  Oh, gawd!  That is an image!  “How did you like the ceremony?”  Nods.  “Was I right?”  Nods. hahaha.
      In spite of how much things are likely going to suck for Oliver, I do smile at the idea of the harpies becoming aware, seeing no Oliver and blaming Cerys.  They’d think she had an impulse control problem and ate him...ha...of course, she won't have to face any real consequences....but if she did...that'd be sweet.
 
   One problem is, luck has been nowhere near on his side.  Sersi (check this out, I’m giving her the benefit of the doubt and NOT chalking it up to her just being a lying, treacherous slime) got lucky when Cam wasn’t paying attention or, settled for partial information, when she was telling him how to get the most desired pussy on campus.  Though that is kind of hard to imagine.  Considering their sibling rivalry (which Sersi takes way too seriously) she’s lucky he even listened to her, but he did, so he could pass on faulty info to Oliver.  Thus making Oliver think he had answers he didn’t have.  She got lucky with the movie quote.   They’ve all been incredibly lucky that Oliver didn’t tip to hints like Vesper knowing his so called mother.  Let’s hope they’ve used up all their luck for this story.  Because Oliver is in the belly of the bitch.  Figuratively.
 
     I'm kind of new to SM fiction, and Oliver's big problem is that he's in an SM story.  The genre is NOT kind to it's protagonists.  SMs never get justice...they get survival...they, maybe, get someone to fight their battles for them.  All their victories are small victories.  Can someone name me a story where you stuck with some poor shrunken guy through some horrible crap and at the end he got even close to balancing the scales?  Where the character’s reward/revenge was worth the hell of act 2?  It’s almost like Oliver is too good a guy for this genre.
      And the GTSs always get the equivalent to a slap on wrist.  I’m very unlikely to get to see Sersi get her fingers and nose eaten off by demon weasels.
    And Oliver has no real chance of getting justice...this thing is too big.  The ‘Mega Cunts have all the power, they’re entrenched.  At this point all he can hope for is...well...he gets away.   He’ll have to have someone take care of him....that’ll sit well with a Wyoming boy.   I’d consider getting depressed and stop reading right now.....as if I could.  But who could?  In spite of how bad it looks, still gotta stick with Oliver. He’s the kind of character you just have faith in.

    Duggernaut is giving us a horror story of epic proportions (yes, I went there.)  It’s so compelling and dark that you can’t turn away.  I know I ain’t gonna.

    Peace.


    PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Hey PixL8Ed great review and you raise some very cogent arguments. Yes there most certainly does seem to be a very black widow vibe. Your allusion to preying on others is also astute. Do they feed on selected sons to minimize exposure or the risk of discovery? Maybe. I have tried to portray Oliver not as a bumpkin but more of a gentleman complicated by hormones. He is no fool though he has certainly been played for one by Sersei.

Let me pose a question about harvesting girls. What happens if a sister violates the oath? Disagrees with the ruling council? Participating in the rite may not always be so black and white. Your assertion that the genre isn't kind to the size altered is correct. Perseverance in the face of the absurd is a favorite of mine but a theme running through is usually a role reversal of power.

This story is still unfolding and there are horrors, delights,  and surprise aplenty yet to be revealed!

 

I just love the fact people are taking the time to get into the story and play along!

 

:)

 

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2017 7:07 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

Obviously, Oliver can run but he's not getting out of the basement. Even if he somehow escaped the basement and eventually the house, what then? I'm looking forward to Vesper plucking him from the floor and holding him in the palm of her hand.  She explaining to him his new reality and how he was never anything but a tool to her. That his entire existence was for this purpose only.  Maybe she will present him with the now life sized wax replica of himself (remember the ones Oliver discovered in her office that were named after the other Omega victims). These replicas may only serve to commemorate the men that they have taken and destroyed,  their lifeless bodies having been flushed down an Omega toilet…



Author's Response:

Do not count Oliver out just yet. You've hit the nail on the head about the candles little keepsakes to mark the passing of past favorites. Ruthless...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2017 5:55 AM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

You're welcome. :-)

As for my "climbing on the bandwagon?" The very nature of this website made it a foregone conclusion that Oliver's shrinkage wasn't preventable! That still doesn't make what the Omega Pis are doing any the less illegal. Sexually arousing? For sure. But, still illegal. Ergo; no! I have no sympathy for whatever rationalization they've been using to justify their activities for over a hundred years.

Author's Response:

I was being facetious particularly in light of how the girls seem to be amoral and without concern for the lives they're destroying. You've been a staunch ally against moral turpitude across a breadth of.my stories. :)

I agree wholeheartedly the nature of the site does foreshadow the fate of certain characters. 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 8:36 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

Hardee har har.  I hope they lose him.

We all know they won't.

Great chapter, and it's very satisfying to have rooted for Oliver this long and see him roll with the punches. 

Thanks Duggernaut and may the adventure/decadence begin.

Peace

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Oliver isn't quite down yet and don't lose the faith. Cam may have been in denial but not.Oliver

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 8:04 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

I was hoping that at the end of the ritual, after Oliver's transformation, we might hear him yell "Help, help, I've been reaped!!"... ;)



Author's Response:

Clever! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 6:41 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

When Oliver thought Sersei was going to mount him in front of everyone, I laughed so hard! Lol, "he is prepared". Ah, I love it.

So the drink is just so they can lead him to the basement. Once he is there, the spell holds him from there.

See, the problem with Oliver's plan was that it was HIS big night. If he was a spectator like the previous 2 times, then it would actually work.

I'm actually wondering what would happen if Oliver's plan did work. I mean this process has been going on for years and I bet Oliver would confuse the ladies and I think it would have been pretty entertaining to see Oliver fool them.

So he is free to move after he shrinks. Do the girls see him, or are they closing their eyes for the ritual? Imagine if Oliver manages to escape.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

All the Omega girls are motionless, frozen as if rapt by the swoon, so no, they can't see him! ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 6:35 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

"Hmmmm, not quite as planned."

I'll say.

"...like his vocal cords were paralyzed and the words in his head _could_ (sic) find their way to his tongue."

One-half gold star deducted. :-)

Author's Response:

Fixed, thanks for the catch!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 5:55 PM Title: A Little Something for the Big night

Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!! Not our hero too!!!  I knew Vesper was behind it all (at least at this chapter for the sorority anyway). How will Oliver get out of this mess?  Heartless bitches...



Author's Response:

It does seem as if Oliver has found himself in quite the pickle of a situation.

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