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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 9:48 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Hey!  No fair!  Oliver plays with himself and misses important clues.  Sersi plays with herself and just intuits a problem?...guys have intuition too!

Oh! And Cam wasn't "happy enough" about his life being destroyed?!?!?!  I hope she dies in a slow, humilitating fashion.  Something involving weasels.

So...Queen Evil Skank might take a shine to Oliver?  Well, it might be impossible for Oliver to make his situation better with her over him.  So bad.  On the other hand...Ha Ha ! Screw You Sersi!

Really creating some intrigue here Duggernaut.  The web you've weaved really has me caught.  It reads like a Hitchcockian horror mystery and I'm just hooked.  Great, amazing stuff.

 

Peace,

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

That because men are dumb beasts easily led astray, and as a man i own that.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 7:05 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

This Prima Eligendo sounds like a quasi-Amazonian version of a certain Norman custom from the Middle Ages. Wherein the lord of the land could deflower a newlywed peasant bride on her wedding night...before even consummating with her own husband!

Author's Response:

I based it off the right of Prima Noctae, exactly what you mentioned!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:25 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Well....that's a plot twist for sure.

After all this time, we realize that Sersei might not even get to play with Oliver? Hmm. Obviously I'm a bit dissapointed becuase every time a new character is intrigued, they tend to change the plot somehow.

Hopefully, this works out in our favor and Sersie's.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:08 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Hmmm intersting... so the life energy not only maintains the beauty of the Omega participants, it extends their lives as well.  So, for the old ones, their very lives depend on the reaping of the life energy...



Author's Response:

Almost like energy vampires, youth and vanity at someone else expense...

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