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Reviewer: IN54N1TY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2017 3:55 PM Title: Stan

I was at a wedding over the weekend and there was one girl there who i couldn't stop starring at and i couldn't figure out why because she was hot but not the hottest one there then i realized... she was EXACTLY how i pictured Kandi in my head



Author's Response:

Man, color me jello!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 11:20 PM Title: Stan

Okay, I figured it out.  Stan is the type of guy who sees what he wants to see in women. 

That explains how he can be taken in by an evil cow like Samantha.

Carycomic-thanks for the tip, but Min' never made much F/f content, which is the flaver of SW I prefer.  Think Sally Reynolds' "Slumber Party."  Great stuff.



Author's Response:

Stan has no reason to suspect anything untoward. the name of the sorority means zero to him as long as she is enjoying herself. don't we all see what we want to see and blind ourselves to other truths?

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 7:06 AM Title: Stan

And another thing...in what universe does that psycho bitch have "innocent eyes."  She wouldn't even be able to generate a glamour to give the effect: she wouldn't even know what they look like.

Just sayin'.

God...so hooked on this story....someone make some nice SW porn that I don't have to think about.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 10:25 PM Title: Stan

What if Stan shrinks and Samantha gets to play with him? That actually sounds like a good idea.

I'm hope Vesper returns soon. I miss her.

Do parents usually talk about their kids dating and having sex like this? Do they think that Oliver attracts a lot of girls? I wonder why Stan brought up Oliver getting into a girl.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We shall soon see Vesper in all her glory... but the satory is going to move in a direction that might leave you feelings somewhat disheartened by my previous comment. Sorry Tom.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:37 PM Title: Stan

A thought occurred to me... If there are any fans of the original Star Trek out there, there was an episode called "Mudd's women".  In the show, there was something called the "Venus drug".  This drug, when taken by a very average looking woman, made her look like a perfect 10.  Is it possible that the harvest of the life energy of their victims has the same effect on the participating Omega sisters? Is this the reason they keep going back for more…? To maintain their beauty…? Like I said, it’s just a thought...



Author's Response:

Seems like someone has caught on to my little charade...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:24 PM Title: Stan

Oh, brother! I wonder if that photo-capture was actually sent by Oliver? Or could it have been sent by Sersei, herself?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:08 PM Title: Stan

At first I took pity on Samantha.  Here she was, a sister of the Omegas but one who was being forced to give up Oliver, her dearest love.  The mere thought of what Oliver had in store made her an emotional train wreck.  Like I said... I felt bad for her... until this chapter.  She is as bad as any of them.  She still participates in robbing these college men of their lives.  They all deserve to burn. It seems that Stan's visit may interfere with the timing of the plans the sisters have for Oliver.  This should be interesting.  Can't wait for more... 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 7:40 PM Title: Stan

Is Samantha about to become another Jessica Atreides?

And how old is Vesper, if this has been going on for awhile?



Author's Response:

Jessica turned her back on the Bene Gesserit for the sake of the Kwisatz Haderach. It brings up and interesting thought about regressive latent abilities. Does Oliver possess some type of power? The next Maud Dib? Hmmm

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 6:56 PM Title: Stan

Okay, just for the record, did I miss something?  Does Oliver know his mom was a 'mega?  How could he not if she's going on "reteats?"  If that clue was given I just missed it.  He didn't know how his boss could know his mom, wouldn't that be an obvious link?

I know...there's a very good chance, as a growing boy, he just never cared what sorority his mom was in.

By the way, any mom who is willing to see her son sacrificed can burn in existencial hell...the one that really hurts.

I am really hooked on this damn story.

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