Date: February 26 2017 1:50 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1
Normally, I don't have a lot of use for a SM story (being a SW fan.) I only intended to read Michael's story because it had F/f content (a nice scene BTW.) But damn it was a good story.
So I see your name on Property of Omega Pi and I figue it won't hurt to look... and GODDAMMIT you got me hooked. You've created such compelling character. Such intrigue. I really care what happens to Oliver and Cam.
Usually when I do read SM I'm appreciating the naughtiness of the girls, but really rooting for your guys. I want them to be figure things out and be ok. (Oliver and Cam, I don't think anybody's gonna cry when Bear gets his.) I can't be "with" the girls in this one...too evil.
I do want to mention that Oliver can check if he's been roofied, there's a rape services in every town that will give him a piss test. Of course,If he finds something odd..."wormwood???what???" He might start researching down the right path.
Oliver and Cam are two of the most interesting characters in the genre. And,consdering the Omega Pi's tastes, it kind of explains why every guy on campus these days is a beta male cuck.
Btw, did you get the message I sent you?
I hope you will continue to be inspired to work on this, I really want to see where it goes.
Peace,
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Hi PixL8Ed thanks for taking the time to read this story and share your thoughts. Unfortunately I did not receive your message for whatever reason. I can be reached at Duggernaut66@outlook.com I really appreciate the fact you explored a story outside your normal preferences. FYI I have the next few chapters roughed out so I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of this little tale. :) Also thanks for the thumbs up on Michael's Story and the F/f
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 6:49 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1
Wow! That was so cruel! Sersei shows complete disrespect toward Cam! That just wasn't right! I mean, if Cam dies, his sister will be responsible.
Cam is struggling to get himself free and then Sersei just pushes his head inside and continuous to push him until even her own finger was deep inside! Part of me felt that Sersei is blind to the danger of that action.
Teagen and Kandi are great but I know that part 2 will be better. Well, part 2 is always better. Part 1 is tongue fucking. Part 2 is with the other orifices.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sersei showed her colors while Teagan and Kandi get better acquainted and I think part 2 will get a little more in depth - pun intended
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 4:49 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1
Heh! All that was missing was the four of them watching "Supergirl On Demand" featuring Alex Danvers and Maggie Sawyer.
Author's Response:
Hmm having not seen the show...
Date: February 25 2017 1:06 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1
The kind of sister every brother would like to have...
Author's Response:
Am I detecting a hint of sarcasm?