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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 3:08 PM Title: Vesper's Office

My apologies to TS and anyone who read my review before reading the chapter and believe to have been misled.  My review is based on my perception of both the chapter and story as a whole from the details released thus far. TS may be correct.  In the future I will limit my reviews to the details released in a given chapter...



Author's Response:

Feel free to speculate away. that's half the fun of seeing how readers interpret where I'm guiding this story. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 8:25 AM Title: Vesper's Office

I made the mistake of reading shrinkmeister's review before the chapter and I was looking for Vesper being the queen of the omegas. Only I didn't. In fact, we met who was in charge at the cafe shop earlier in the story.

Also, we see Vesper more involved with the Omegas, but I wouldn't say she is running the show. A few shrunken molds and dildos is all she had basically. She probably helps with shrinking and custom sex stuff.

Funny thing now is that Oliver is thinking about Vesper the same way I am. Ever since we met her, I was thinking of the dirty thoughts and it looks like Oliver has joined the club. It must be fun working for a sexy boss who is into a fetish for tiny guys.

Now we just need some Vesper looking through her store cameras and watching Oliver go through her stuff. Instead of being angry with Oliver, I suspect she would be curious to see how Oliver reacts as he goes through each item, especially the dildos. Then, I hope Vesper really starts flirting with the idea of putting Oliver in her dildo or soemthing.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

PSYCH! Who is to say the significance of Vesper role. she could still be a very important figure in this drama as it unfolds. Maybe...  :)

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2017 8:25 PM Title: Vesper's Office

Wow... another great chapter!  Just as I suspected... Vesper is the queen of the Omegas, the one really running the show and facilitating the disappearances and murders of dozens of young college men.  Obviously, she enjoys what she does.  She allows the Omegas to discuss the awarding of bands with her only son knowing full well that he too will eventually be sacrificed to the sisters.  Our hero Oliver is catching on and won't be partaking in the Omega's special brew at the next meeting. How will the Omegas perform the ritual on Bear (and possibly Oliver) if Oliver does not play along and drink the Omega's roofie?  This should be interesting... :)



Author's Response:

There will be more on the ritual to come. Seeing Aventus and how nonchalantly Vesper is treating him is kind of ruthless, because I think we all see the fate that awaits.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2017 6:13 PM Title: Vesper's Office

Hmmmmmmm! I hope Vesper really _can't_ read minds. Otherwise, Oliver is in real trouble!*

*Then, again, her last name does include the letters ESP.

Author's Response:

I think we would all be screwed if they could read minds... In this case, Oliver might still be in a whack of trouble

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