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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2016 1:16 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel

New member here.  Absolutely love your work.  From the clues you have left, clearly the omega pi sisters are skilled in the dark arts of witchcraft. The references to the circle being complete and pagan verbiage leave little doubt.  I suspect Vesper is the head over the coven. Is Cam's life as he knew it over or can the spell be reversed? Will Oliver discover the truth in time? How many other naive young men have met the same fate as Cam? What happens when the toys have out lived their usefulness? I can't wait for more.  Keep up the great work and keep the chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Hi Shrinkmeister, thanks for taking the time to create an account and share your thoughts! There does certainly seem to be a pagan inclination and so far there is no telling how far back this particular tradition dates. There are still a whole lot of questions left unanswered at this stage of the story, and you're right, will Oliver be able to put the pieces together before Sercsei tighten the snare. should be fun to find out! :)

Reviewer: seanpatty Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 10:22 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel

Woo that was hot!!~



Author's Response:

Thank you. Hopefully the long intro was worth these kind of chapters... :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 4:12 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel

I was listening to Interstellar music and it surprisingly matched the chapter as Cam was "floating in space" inside Brooklyn.

Once again, another amazing chapter with the amazing Brooklyn. I agree. I love her playfulness.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Maybe some laser Floyd, Great Gig in the Sky, Us and Them, who knows. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 3:03 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel

:-O

Now would be the perfect time for me to snow shovel my driveway.

Author's Response:

Excellent! Nothing like blowing off a little steam

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