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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 12:58 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

@ Dug:

Thanks! Don't mind if I do.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 9:26 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

WOW!!!!!

Thank you for giving us this erotic new installment. :-)

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Ice water?

Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 1:21 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

Really wonderful chapter. Terrific descriptions!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2016 10:36 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

After all these stories and chapters about insertion, you seem to have perfected this scene in my opinion. You have recently increased the level of detail which is great.

I love how you describe her body clinging onto Cam's body as if it were like an animal itself. Also the part where as Cam struggled, it pulled him in. And lastly how her pussy is reluctant to let him go. It's like a mosnter that wants to eat him up. :)

Brooklyn seems like a very sexy girl. I remenber when we first met her, she was described as this athletic girl going for a run. Then she was talking to Oliver and even flirting with him! Love her playfulness too.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, my difficulty is trying to try and find new and interesting ways to explore this type of interaction without becoming repetitive and insipid. Glad you approve! Brooklynn is definitely a fun girl with lots of energy!

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