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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 7:59 PM Title: A Brooklynn dodger

Fantasy just dominates reality. I wish I can be alive when the world discovers shrinking. Wouldn't that be something...

Surrounded by college girls, all horny, sexy, and giantesses. I love how excited they are to see Cam all tiny and their reactions.

I think my favorite part of this chapter was Sersei saying "not my favorite moment" with that seductive tone. You wrote that beautifully, especially mentioning the eyebrows raised. I knew excactly what you meant, and I agree, it is also my favorite moment. I can't wait for it.

Also, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you approve, because your favorite part is coming up soon, :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 6:49 PM Title: A Brooklynn dodger

Excellent baseball pun!!!

Author's Response:

How about an inside the park homerun? O-:

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