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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 8:20 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story

Of course, the rest of us know what really happened to Cam. I just hope Sersei is touched by how genuine Oliver's concern for her brother really is.

Author's Response:

Mmm, maybe...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 1:37 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story

Hmmmm. Well, since I know where this story is going, I can't wait for Cam next chapter.

If I was Oliver, I would show uneasiness to Sersei and make her know that I don't feel safe around her. She will question it, and then I explain why it looks sketchy and either she tells the truth or delivers a much more convincing lie.

Well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

He  has no reason to doubt Sersei, besides, her presence messes with his logical thought...

Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 1:23 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story

Feel like I stepped into an episode of Lost. I like the mystery and adventure. Your slow reveal of Cam's true size I have a feeling is going to be epic.



Author's Response:

I hope it lives up to expectation, :O

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