Date: November 03 2016 11:47 AM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Cam is gone, but not from Oliver's memory. Question is, do others know about Cam or is Oliver the only one?
This could be one of two things:
1) Reality has been altered, and Cam was never a normal student.
2) Reality has not been altered, and they simply took Cam's stuff to his new room, and they were very meticulous about it.
We also don't know if Cam is going to be in the sorority house full time, or if he'll be allowed to become normal sized and go to class.
There's also the question of Oliver's job. When he gets shrunk, will he be restored to work there or will he have to quit the job?
However, Oliver was presumably shrunk that night. Could it be that Cam is shrunk full time and Oliver will be shrunk occasionally?
Author's Response:
With the GTS content coming soon, readers will have a clearer picture of what is occuring. Well, at least that's the plan.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2016 7:28 PM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Moral of the chapter? Never drink anything that might leave you Omega Pi-eyed.
Seriously, though: I like the mysterious cliff-hanger! We readers know, just from this story's presence here, what most likely happened the rest of that night before. But, gradually seeing the flashback through the eyes of the still-mystified protagonist is a plot gimmick that is rarely exercised, here. And I find your use of it, with this story, refreshing.
In fact, I'll go one step further and say that this whole story being centered around the titular sorority nicely compensates for the absence of such a plot gimmick (re: Jessica Lindholm) within TOM'S STORY!!
Author's Response:
Pi-eyed, nice. I would have also accepted Omega Pi-ckled. There has been a considerable drag and story to get here and i appreciate your commentary surrounding the usee of plot devices to msintain an element of suspense (even though as your say, readers will have a pretty good idea where its going) it was the use of Omega Pi for Jessica's sorority that prompted this story.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2016 5:13 PM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Ok. Now I'm just confused. I'm not even sure what to review about.
Oliver wakes up. And, he seems to be still waking up. Shaking up the sleep out of his eyes.
Cam is gone, but not from Oliver's memory. Question is, do others know about Cam or is Oliver the only one?
Once again you surprise me with another weird transition chapter which I have yet to conclude what the heck it's about. I don't know what I think about it.
Maybe, Cam will find answers that Oliver didn't. Hopefully at least I get some answers too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oliver obviously passed out and awoke in his dorm room and all trace of Cam is gone. Next chapter, Cam awakens....