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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 9:02 PM Title: Olive Branch

The way you've been describing them, these last few chapters, I now get the impression that Cameron and Sersei's relationship is more like that of good-natured rivals than, say, a Hatfield/McCoy-style feud.

Author's Response:

Exactly right. the dynamic isn't rancorous, more like playfully chippy

Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 5:58 PM Title: Olive Branch

Tell the story you want. This set-up is great. I love the characters. Don't rush it along just to please the critics.



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy! I won't compromise the story aspect but might improve the delivery schedule to keep people interested. :)

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