Date: October 03 2016 7:35 AM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
Personally, I like a slow build up with lots of character development. It makes the meat of the story that much better.
And growth at the stripper bar? Sounds interesting.
Author's Response:
My preference is also to flesh out the characters to enhance the story aspect of the tale.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2016 9:02 PM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
"...at the stripper bar, there might be some growth..."
LOL! Good one. :-)
Date: October 02 2016 3:18 AM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
Not being funny mate but there are slow burns and then there's this.
Does it really need at least 7 chapters before anything remotely Giantess even begins to happen?
You write very well but I'm sorry, this is now at the point of being just boring.
Author's Response:
Hey Pdawg thanks for the great review. I appreciate you taking the time to share your input. I apologize for the hair growing pace and will try and step it up some by doubling up on chapersonal. All I request is some patience as the next few chapters have already been drafted.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 8:40 PM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
A stripper bar??! Oh, crap! I hope he doesn't show up for his first day on the job completely hung-over. For some reason, I think his shrinking in the next chapter would be too soon.
Author's Response:
This tale seems to be taking a while to evolve so no shrinkage imminently if anything at the stripper bar there might be some growth