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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2016 6:05 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity

Oliver said to Cam that he saw two of his sister's housemates, and they were going somewhere is there a hidden place full of shrunken guys.



Author's Response:

Another interesting premise. Maybe the girls do have a cache of little ones tucked away. WEe'll see as this story continues to unfold. Thanks for the read and review, it is always awesome to get feedback!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 1:18 PM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity

And the wristbands are how the determine who's going to shrink, and who gets him. The secret is what the date entails.



Author's Response:

Bingo! All will be revealed :)

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 9:25 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity

Still interesting :)


(my reviews, they're so creative)

Author's Response:

...and still gratly appreciated :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 6:25 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity

I loved this chapter! It was like listening to a debate between Dr. Ruth... and Dr. Zachary Smith.

Author's Response:

Lol I wasn't hoping the dialogue would come off as witty as the two young men get to know each other.

Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 5:51 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity

The dialogue is funny and I'm enjoying the characters' development. Flashes me back to when I was 18-19 and horny and naive as hell.



Author's Response:

Thanks that was the effect I was trying to capture

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