Date: January 15 2017 10:08 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
You don't have to change/limit your reviews at all since I misinterpreted it. You view is how you saw and I just saw it differently that's all.
I put up spoiler filled reviews about 90% of the time. I also include random thoughts that might happen in the future. People have than replied to my reviews saying this or that, but at the end of the day, I see it as a way to an open conversation.
My point is limiting your reviews won't be as fun to read.
You talked about Vesper being the queen, operating the whole thing, and the one who informs people of such information. You sold me with this idea. Even though it wasn't exactly in the chapter, I found it entertaining to read.
Date: December 17 2016 5:44 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Might you consider anyone inside the sorority breaking to some degree because of the ideological stress?
Author's Response:
There is always the possibility, of say, perhaps someone new to the sisterhood? A certain disharmony? I guess we shall see :)
[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 4:16 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
"She's a big girl."
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Anyway, another great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Right? These girls are ruthless in their own way! Thanks for the review :
Date: December 15 2016 8:44 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Could we get some gentle footwear entrapment with Cam? Oliver needs to start trying to talk to Cam and irk the girls off with stubbornness
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do to maybe incorporate some silk stocking entrapment. As for Oliver, he needs to break Sersei's spell and him and clue in to what is going on. We shall see :)
Date: December 10 2016 3:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@duggernaut
Oh. I had for some reason always assumed Tom was about 3 inches tall, which is much larger than half the length of an index finger. I guess I assumed wrong.
Author's Response:
I think over the course of the year and half I have been working on Tom's Story, I envisioned somewhere between two and three inches and have described him against various measures that haven't necessarily been quite as consistent as I should. Having said that, the difference between two and three inches is quite considerable to our shrunken protagonists so my apologies for any confusion. Undoubtedly at some point, I'm sure I'll obscure it again... :(
Thanks again for the input, it will help me to remember to try and be more consistent. Generally for me, if I am thinking vore, I'll edge closer to two, if not, then three. (but even that isn't a hard and fast standard)
Date: December 10 2016 4:19 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@foreignkanto,
I'm sure they are the same size. Tom just knows where to go and what to do so he finds a way to slither where he wants to go.
Cam feels the same pressure as Tom, but he feels cramped since this is new to him and therefore he doesnt move much, hoping it will end soon.
Author's Response:
I tried to use the Oreo as a size reference for readers, but in my mind they are similar in size.
Date: December 08 2016 6:18 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
This has got to be an harrowing adventure story, get Oliver on the run and have him start looking for cam , what happens when the omega pi huntress is hunted?
Date: December 03 2016 2:08 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
This story is gain momentum and popularity. Seems like a little apprentice to Tom's story. Maybe it's becuase it also takes place in a school setting.
I guess people love school fantasies. (Including me.)
Look at all these reviewers! It's great to see some new faces around here.
Author's Response:
It is awesome people are taking the time to share reviews. i know i greatly look forward to all of them as a source of feedback, positive or constructive in helping to communicate how the story is being received so hopefully people will keep'em coming!
Date: December 02 2016 10:03 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
The review below this one summarizes why I think Carycomic and Duggernaut would be great roommates like Cam and Oliver. Especially with all these analogies, puns, and references.
Author's Response:
Too funny :)
[Report This]Date: December 01 2016 5:00 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
I've been reading through your stories (after reading Tom's story I couldn't stop) and the thing that's stood out to me is that other than a few small things your stories don't really show any evidence of coexisting in the same world... I think once you finish off Tom's story have him back to his full size and ready to go to college and he ends up going to the school Property of Omega Pi takes place in. Maybe have a few chapters of his perspective as he first moves in and as he learns by himself what the pink bands mean (what they allegedly mean) and gets excited when he gets three then when he finds out the truth it's bitter sweet since he gets unlimited access to 20 of the hottest girls on campus but also realizes there's no (easy) way out of this one... but he uses his usual charm and experience to amaze the girls until he figures something out. Also maybe something about how his charm gets him the bands faster than anyone else in the history of omega pi.
Again this is another of your instant classics and I can't wait for the storyline to unravel more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to check out my other stories! I know I need to finish many them, but i do get sidetracked fairly easily. there are usually a number of links tying them to gether subtly but typically I would like them to start apart. That would be quite the surprise for Tom to grad and wind up on the Omega list. I guess it probably be a shock both ways!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2016 5:03 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Lol I hope Oliver figures it out before it's too late
Author's Response:
He's obviously missing something and the clock is ticking while Sersei circles like a shark playing with its dinner
[Report This]Date: November 27 2016 8:59 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
"I’m guessing right about now he’s still in a little over his head but he should be fitting in nicely in short order."
No way she didn't have that one planned out
Author's Response:
Absolutely without a doubt she crafted that one up just to be cheeky
Date: November 26 2016 3:31 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Carycomic,
Ha! I think you already know the answer.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2016 8:55 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Here, please have all of my yes
Author's Response:
I am humbled by your generosity
Date: November 23 2016 10:13 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Duggernaut,
You have been updating this story like crazy. However, I'm wondering when will the shoebox chapter will update.
Author's Response:
Done
Date: November 21 2016 7:37 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Maybe take some time for Oliver to get caught, make the girls frustrated and figure a way out from the collage of info he stumbles upon in meandering around fate, make this an adventure story, not an interaction story
Author's Response:
Hmm, there is probably a happy somewhere in there. We'll see how this progress. thanks for your input!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 3:22 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Hey-hey! LT's in the house. Welcome back!
The rhyme scheme was a little off, though. Half a star deduction. ;-)
Date: November 20 2016 4:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Cam! Cam! He's our man! If Duggernaut can't have him fulfill our wildest fantasies, no one can!
Author's Response:
Whew, that's a lot to put on Duggernaut - good thing I've got big shoulders :)
Date: November 17 2016 10:33 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
I can't wait to read about the adventures Cam is about to have. Please more!
Author's Response:
On it's way!
Date: November 05 2016 2:55 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
It's a shoebox! Why? Well, Duggernaut referenced Jessica's sorority from Tom's story in this story and now he is referencing the shoebox story with a shoebox in this story! It makes sense!
Author's Response:
Very clever...