Date: July 08 2017 8:30 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@pixl8ed,
If Oliver was really "lucky", he would be in the clutches of Brooklyn. :) That's my type of luck.
Date: June 26 2017 5:27 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
It's a good thing, making those connections. I was joking about you not telling me that stuff because my mind gets all twisted and I spend many minutes day dreaming.
Date: June 25 2017 2:39 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Duggernaut
Don't tease me like that, ok. (Please do it again.) You got my head spinning with this Brooklyn Harwood idea.
Author's Response:
But that would mean...?
[Report This]Date: June 17 2017 12:25 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
wow! Things are really building up here! I have to say this story has definitely been the one that has most kept me hanging so far of the edge off my seat!!!
Author's Response:
Excellent - so glad to hear I've captured your interest! Bring on the girls!
Date: June 02 2017 6:45 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Also, there are apps that track location and since Oliver's phone is with Sersei, the Omega Pi house becomes a target. Bet Sersei didn't think that through.
Date: June 01 2017 12:22 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
Whoops, that was a typo. I meant Cady, not Cary.
Date: May 25 2017 12:02 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
You got beat to 300. You are 301st.
Date: May 17 2017 11:10 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Goblo,
You posted the exact same review 1 month ago, and people responded to it so I'm not sure why are you asking it again. Just read those reviews back then to find your answer.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: May 17 2017 9:36 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Why are so many reviews on here, the chapters are really flat and also not fun to read, just too short. maybe try to put at least 3-4 together into one instead of putting out so many short chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input. I'm sorry you feel the chapters are flat and not fun to read.
Date: May 15 2017 6:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Hold up a second, Cadence from shoebox?! Are we seeing a shared universe here.
Author's Response:
Wouldn't that just be the absolute worst fuck score for this story? Bad enough you have a sorority of shrinkers running rampant, add in a little freelance poaching action. that would be horrible, tee hee
Date: April 20 2017 1:46 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Wow it worked. Reviewing just got more fun. I don't know what happened at the end of my last review, but at least I got what I wanted.
Date: April 20 2017 1:44 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
I think that's the first time I have seen an emoji in a review. Now I got to try it. 😀😍🤑🍆🍑💖👍.
Now for the ladies: 💄💋👄👅👠👙👙👗d84;a039;
Date: April 19 2017 9:50 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Tom... It's just a story... 😀
Date: April 17 2017 8:31 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Gogblo,
Lots of beautiful girls, likeable protagonists, school setting is fun, college is fun too, which means hot college girls, Omega Pi girls are like models, doesn't it excite you to be in their clutches?
In addition, it's a mystery to the guys in this story. Also, each tiny is being passed on from hot girl to hot girl. Now many people love that.
Short chapters don't matter if they keep coming every week. Also, don't forget the awesome teasing cliffhangers that leave us wanting more.
This story is fresh, seems original to me. Even though there are many school stories, whenever Duggernaut takes a spin with it, be prepared to mindblown.
The relationships between the girls and the boys are cute. Oliver and his roommates get a long nicely and we readers enjoy that. We feel for them as they get captured and sometimes I imagine that I am that shrunken college kid trapped in a sorority house full of sexy ladies.
It's more than just a hot read. There's also a quality story as Oliver tried to discover what is going on. It's fun to see his fails, and also when he learns more clues. Since he is shrunken, it's like a threshold is broken and we can't wait for Oliver to take in everything and work his brain around what happened.
By the ridiculous amount of positive reviews, just check each review on what they like. The larger the review, usually that means they have a lot of good things to say. Recently, a bunch of readers have been debating stuff over this story on the little mystery that Oliver is trying to unravel and it's that suspense of what is going to happen that keeps us on the edge of our seats and keeps us wanting more and clicking the refresh button every day hoping that Duggernaut has updated again.
There are a lot of reasons why I like this story and why others have liked it too. If you don't like it, that's fine, but I hope I was able to portray why we like this story and I hope you at least understand that. Who knows, perhaps in the future, you will like this story too.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom you have always been a staunch advocate for all my stories and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts and feelings in this forum. Some people like my stories others feel I tend to take forever to get to the 'good stuff' but that's the beauty of a site like this as there are thousands of stories out there for people to enjoy. Again thanks for giving voice to your feelings!
Date: April 16 2017 12:27 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Frost is relaxing while Vesper is facilitating everything. She is probably in charge of those group. We don't know all the details.
As for missing sons and stuff, the whole police force has been seduced to do nothing to these girls. They are told to arrest the girl's, but as soon as they see their gorgeous bodies, they call it all off, believing that they are too pretty to be arrested or punished.
Also, Vesper knows how to wrap every powerful person against them around her finger, so the Omegas have nothin to worry about.
They can have fun without consequences. Amazing who controls the power in this story.
Date: April 15 2017 6:42 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
That may be true, Shrinkmeister. But, as Arte johnson might say:
"Zat is a truth ve must only schpeak in Vespers."
Date: April 14 2017 12:25 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
Man, that was a while ago. I guess I have changed it slightly. I do see Vesper as one of the more respected ladies and seems to be pretty important than I once thought.
However, she isn't the queen of these Omegas though. The queen met Oliver in the cafe. (I forgot her name.) I'm sticking to that too. Vesper is like the queen's assistant manager or soemthing.
In short, yes, my opinion of Vesper has changed. She certainly is more involved than I thought and she has great authority in that house.
Date: April 09 2017 10:24 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Well stated Pix... The Omegas are truly deplorable. They have complete disregard for the dignity human life. If we work from the information we have so far, we know that they are both a national and international sorority. Larger sororities have a hundred chapters or more. The sorority began in 1888 and our local chapter takes four men per semester. If we work with these assumptions and we do the math, that translates to upwards of 100,000 men or more that they have taken, destroyed their lives and eventually disposed. For the Omegas, men are cattle and nothing more.
Author's Response:
I think the prologue captures the essence of Omega Pi
"The Omega Pi oath is a sacred trust, a solemn promise that shall never be broken, shall never be compromised and shall endure long after each one of us as individuals have passed through the hallowed halls of academia. It is a lifelong pledge from one sister to another to uphold the values, virtues, and integrity of Omega Pi’s ideals and unwavering pursuits.
As a sisterhood, Omega Pi is greater than any single one of us. In the end we believe it is the little things that make all the difference."
In all seriousness, the numbers become scary...
Date: March 10 2017 11:49 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Dear Pixl8ed: allow me to recommend the shrunken women stories of The-Minimizer @ Deviantart. He used to have his _own_ website. But, apparently, it went bankrupt for one reason or another.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2017 9:30 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Just really really wanted to express my gratitude for your time. BTW this story rocks!
Author's Response:
Thanks