Any chance of this ever coming back?

Author's Response:

I would say 100%

The goddess show concern for a mortal that isn't her 'child' 'can't stay in this vessel before I damage it'-paraphrase.  Oliver is her chosen, can't wait to see Sam, Thomasin and Agnes discuss that one!

Agree the good sisters should of trusted their mates and sons more, I do understand that they were going for damage limitation and rescuing those they could.  To tip their hand and all of them could end up like Agnes or worse.  Fear of their other and more numerous sisters likely have the good ones being as careful as they can be.

Think we haven't herd from Harmony in a while, Larrissa isn't a 'suitable' vessel, could Harmony be the lock that key master Oliver needs to 'open' she is a pure hearted woman and cares for the men who are 'taken', she's also just reached adulthood, may even be a virgin, could she be the goddess gate into this world?

Guessing the goddess is better then her 'children' but with the way men and women are linking up, wouldn't put it past her to have all men 3 inches tall with good normal sized women.  Women who wouldn't hurt them for anything but are now the very dominate gender because the goddess has been unleashed.  Think it's likely she's good (concern for life and choosing Oliver), but her view of 'good' may not be the same as 48% of the population, though it is much better then most of her children.

Thanks!

Cam and Thomasin, that makes three good women with good (if shrunken) men enjoying the other and bringing pleasure to each other (Cady and Deacon as well as Stan and Sam).  Maybe the goddess is making a point here?  Maybe if you love and respect your partner each and share paradise?

From the discription Thomasin need "IT!!!" fairly badly, the poor Vesper has likely been keep herself 'pure' for decades to both bring those 'brothers' she can back and likely cause she has some instantances were she used men like her sisters (can see her being like Harmony, she might of gotten some guilty pleasures but she knew they were wrong...).  Likely her exchange of engery(likely a part gets trapped when restoring) and her postion have kept her young and beautiful and she still has the needs of a young woman with the experence of much more mature beauty.

Either way Cam is doing what he can to please this gentle tigeress and seems to be having great sucess.  I sense Thomasin, if he is ready again will return the favor.

Now Larissa and Oliver, regardless if Larissa is the 'avatar of the goddess' or not, I believe Oliver is in for the ride of his life and if she is...  Well it may just be a 'devine' ecounter...

Great Chapter, Thank you.

Hoping Thomasin is gentle and caring as she is protrayed in earlier chapters.  She was considering 'gently' getting Cameron to 'trust in women again (and I believe she ment all aspects of womanhood...).  Sam was able to control (mostly) her baser urges and let Stan take the lead.  Think a Vesper of Thomasin's character would have nearly as much restraint.  The other Omega Pi's already indifferent wouldn't go out of their way to hurt kill or maim but wouldn't be restrained either.  I am hoping Thomasin and Cam enjoy things...

Like the other reviewer's breakdown of Sam, just how different things would of been if Sam had trusted her two men.  If she had prepared Oliver instead of went with the plan, she could of steared him either away from her 'sisters' or toward those that could of helped him.  I guess fear of her 'sisters' had 'forced' her to keep things close to her. 

That her men could accomplish what they did wasn't factored in and that is on Sam, she's going to have to live with the knowledge that with at best an ad hoc plan, her husband and her son saved themselves and others and if she had let them know more they could of either avoided all this or exposed the evil within the sority in such a manner that even with all their power they would of been brought down, or at least into hiding.

Great Story! 

It seems the goddess is making her moves (Cady & Deacon, Sam & Stan, Larrissa & Oliver, and can we count Tomsion and Cameron).  If it's a weekly update she may have some 'Valentine's Day' plans she's impelmenting.  Doubt it will be good for Edith and the Omega Pi sisters, but that doesn't mean it will be good for Oliver and company, she's a goddess, she has her own set of morality, might be to teach those mortals (even if they are good) to stay out of her line of fire, but my guess is any damage will be overkill spill over, that she wouldn't deliberate harm innocents and as a parting gesture will make things right over time.

Great Story!

Or the Warm feeling maybe him shrinking again?  From the myths and legends I am aware of goddesses (and gods) don't tend to reveal themselves to people they don't like, if they do the smiting is usaully instant and fatal.  If they don't like they send a minion or 'hero' to deal with you or in the best case turn you into an insect or snake woman.

Maybe Oliver could be her vessel, she has a OP daughter there in Sam, she has two sons in Stan and Olvier and Oliver was exposed to her enery twice (laugh manicailly does tend to suggest possesion... and looking up while doing so isnt usually a good sign either).  It's not over even if the goddess wants to make things 'right' her standards are going to be different then humans, perhaps since Sam is already on the path to 'redemption' she'll give a little push and point out her sin in giving into her carnel needs with her husband by further shrinking and/or possesing her boy, maybe make her yeild her life and soul to save her son?

At least she and Stan will have fun before headier issues arise (or fall), maybe all the 'activity' will channel the goddess into the materail world, Caddy and Deacon, Sam and Stan, Larrisa and Oliver?  Maybe once Larrisa and Oliver are done she comes into the world 'worlock 2' style and they all watch in horror as Larrisa's womb grows she gives birth and the baby instantly matures into the goddess where she can thank and smite them simoutenously and prepare them to deal with the real problems, Sams unreformed sisters...

Amazing Chapter, More please!!!!

Great story so far, even though the girls are careless and thoughtless they haven't killed anyone yet (I could be wrong only one questionable is Bear).  Hope Sam and family fix this and the sority as a whole.  Devine intervention would be nice, but selfish people (women in this case) have abused their powers and 'God' smiting them will only fix it short term.  The need leaders like Tomlinson, Agntha (spell is aweful I am sorry) and Sam to correct the wrongs folks like Sabina and Brooklyn have inflicted.

That being said as with other reviewers I would get a kick out their Goddess saying just how evil and stupid they are as she shrinks her "chosen" and lets the boys determine their punishment.

Keep up the awesome work!

Beautiful Chapter, hope their enjoyment helps stablize things.  Hope Sam and Stanley figure out a way to return everyone to normal.

Hope in an ironic twist the Omega Pi goddess they wish to awake is pissed off at them (partilular the older ones) for draining her 'sons' for personal gain rather then using thier powers to help all her children (or morals to that effect), maybe have Sabina and grandma and the ones who injured or killed shrunk down to three inches and see how long they last.

Again great chapter.

Aside from the excellent fanservice, this story has enough drama and mystery to carry it on its own.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and props on the story!

@pixl8ed,

The story was fine. I just found the timing of the story to be forced. Oliver and Cam are deciding if they should go out and risk themselves. However, right before that, while they are still deciding, Cam just says "funny story" and just casually tells Oliver about a memory he had with Sersei.

The story could have been told when they were safe in the plant before Cery's offered her deal. Story time at this momemnt seemed off. Part of me felt that Oliver was getting impatient with Cam as he told it and then felt sorry when Cam geared up. However, those tears didn't stop Oliver from going to the water and then bar.

Since Oliver seemed to have made up his mind before the story was told, I now think Cam was just trying to stall Oliver and keep him close for as long as possible. Perhaps, Cam faked the crying to get Oliver to stay with him?

Hmm. Like I said, the story was fine, but as I was waiting for Oliver's decision on what should he do, Cam just tells his story in the middle of it, which felt random to me.