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Reviewer: thebestthing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 11:21 PM Title: Day 1: Part 1

Can you make more chapters please.

Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 8:38 PM Title: Day 1: Part 1

I don't normally enjoy body exploration, but I am loving this. My suggestion: you seemed to imply this already, but I would like to see character to end up in Sarah with her being unaware of him. I will continue to read no matter where you take it, though. Hope a new chapter comes out soon!

Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to what I have planned for Sarah. It'll be a bit before we see her sadly.

Reviewer: biokogy22 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 8:37 PM Title: Day 1: Part 1

Yeah, Chris is definitely not going to like Mei if he survives XD calling him a parasite and fiith is kinda pushing how much she could humiliate him. I'm wondering why Kayla would agree if she's worried about Chris's well being, I assume Mei lied although I doubt Chris would care since he was knowingly put in a situation where he has to eat filth and can die in a horrible way because of them. 

I can see the conversation now: "so you learn your lesson?" "Yes, now I don't want to see either of you ever again unless you're coming with one hell of an apology for the past month." *Chris leaves* "well... fuck".

She's being pretty brutal to him. Although I get the feeling if he dies, they will hopefully respect him enough to tell the truth to Sarah and his mother which will be an incredibly awakward conversation (kinda rooting for Chris here as all he did was gamble way too much XD). And if he does survive and they want to remain friends/close, they've a lot of groveling to do because he will likely hate their guts (literally and figuretively) for pretty much everything, lying to his family and loved ones, taking a month before classes to teach him the lesson so when he goes back he'll be tired and exhausted and probably hurt while they all got to relax, etc.

At the same time, I also think that there's a chance he'd be changed for the worse being called and treated like a parasite and filth by them over and over. So yeah, if he survives the girls will have a TON of work ahead of them since they'll no doubt (due to his relations to them) feel accountable for his state afterward, let alone if they even want him to talk to them about anything. Although I can see a card saying "Sorry for Shrinking you for a month" being pretty funny XD.

The chapter is good, description of the vast world he's on. It's alien but at the same time, Chris noticing things that he remembered when he was normal was a nice touch. 

These aren't criticims, just thoughts as I was reading. Good Story, can't wait to see more.

 



Author's Response:

Oh trust me, Chris is going to have some very choice words and responses for them if he makes it through this. It's only the start of the month and he has a long ways to go! I'm glad you put so much thought into it, thanks!

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 8:20 AM Title: Day 1: Part 1

This story is getting better by the chapter! The milk was a great Addition to his deppendance on her. Wonder what else will he have to survive on when he is not on her nipple. Thanks for the read!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you are enjoying it! Trust me, our boy is going to have to do some things he will want to forget before its over

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