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Reviewer: Right Wing Attack Dog Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2008 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

a wierd story...it was good though. still wierd...ugh, now you've really turned me against cheerleaders... lol

Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2007 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah I remember seeing this story before. Not bad.

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2007 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Could have expected more for a hundred years later in tech... They could have found a better way to quarantine it in the future or just plainly nuked it so it'd not be an issue on the taxpayer any further. Overall, I liked the story's idea, but a few things could have made it a bit more realistic.

I assumed Steph could live that long due to the effects of the toxin or something, so it wasn't much of an issue to me. Overall, good plotline and story, but could be better.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2007 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

it was a good story somethings i didn't get one was how did Stephanie/The Cheerleader stay alive for the hundred years or so? Because at the start of the story she was nomal and it didnot tell how she live that long. One more thing how did they eat and go to the bathroom? Over all it was a good story.

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