Date: November 09 2018 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Novatech
Just found this story a couple of days ago, and read all 29 chapters. This is a really good story, well written, with good character development and an interesting storyline. One of the best on this site. Even the science behind the shrinking is plausible.
I am in love with Beth!!! She is tall, leggy, beautiful and has huge breasts . What's not to love about her?? But best of all she is smart, caring, loving and gentle. My kind of Amazon. I like the slight dom side too.
I like the slow shrink style and it has been done well in this story. My only concern is if Darren ends up at 2-3 inches tall. It seems like every shrink story ends up with this size. I don't see the allure of that size, it's good for vore, crush and foot play, none of which float my boat. The only size below 3-4 feet that works for me is 6-12 inches, at least she can use him as a dildo at that size.
Whatever direction you take I will continue to follow this one, as it is excellent.
Thanks for sharing.
Date: May 03 2018 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 29: Alone Under Observation
I've been silently lurking on this story for a while and I've gotta say that I love what you're doing. I can't wait to see if Darren shrinks down to handheld. Maybe another gathering of some sort will end him up in the clutches of Cynthia. Can't wait to see.
5 Gold Stars
Date: April 26 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Novatech
Hello. i used to write stories but had to stop and be a mother to my new born. i miss writing but vore never left my soul and swear one day i will vore a tiny person. LOL.
what inspired you to write?
Date: April 24 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dark Klein
Nice chapter. I would have liked to have seen a Woman running the company. Will that eventually happen?
I felt that between Miranda and Braddock we had a docket of powerful women to deal with first, and I felt the character of Klein was more interesting without the overtones that color Darren's relationships with the women in his life since he shrunk.
Date: April 14 2018 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 25: After the Party
Shopping for doll clothes is a logical step in the direction he is headed. Loved the ladies talking about him like he wasn't there. That is how big people treat little people. Their feelings don't matter. This was a particularly well written chapter.
Date: April 07 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Night Alone Together, Part 2
What a cool and fun chapter. Being the little man for Beth seems to be too much. I am also wondering if Dr. Hertz really wants to stop his shrinking or if she really wants to study him as he shrinks.
Really enjoyed this chapter. At 2-6 I am guessing that he is about knee height to the ladies.