Date: May 03 2018 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 29: Alone Under Observation
I've been silently lurking on this story for a while and I've gotta say that I love what you're doing. I can't wait to see if Darren shrinks down to handheld. Maybe another gathering of some sort will end him up in the clutches of Cynthia. Can't wait to see.
5 Gold Stars
Date: April 26 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Novatech
Hello. i used to write stories but had to stop and be a mother to my new born. i miss writing but vore never left my soul and swear one day i will vore a tiny person. LOL.
what inspired you to write?
Date: April 24 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dark Klein
Nice chapter. I would have liked to have seen a Woman running the company. Will that eventually happen?
I felt that between Miranda and Braddock we had a docket of powerful women to deal with first, and I felt the character of Klein was more interesting without the overtones that color Darren's relationships with the women in his life since he shrunk.
Date: April 14 2018 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 25: After the Party
Shopping for doll clothes is a logical step in the direction he is headed. Loved the ladies talking about him like he wasn't there. That is how big people treat little people. Their feelings don't matter. This was a particularly well written chapter.
Date: April 07 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Night Alone Together, Part 2
What a cool and fun chapter. Being the little man for Beth seems to be too much. I am also wondering if Dr. Hertz really wants to stop his shrinking or if she really wants to study him as he shrinks.
Really enjoyed this chapter. At 2-6 I am guessing that he is about knee height to the ladies.
Date: March 22 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 17: A Solution at Last
Great chapter. Loved the size comparisons. Getting his kiss wiped off his cheek was great. I would like to see more of Dr. Braddock handling him if he truly shrinks to a few inches tall. This was a wonderful chapter to read.