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Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2016 6:09 PM Title: Vore

The style so far is confessional, a sort of free-flowing diary.  We know that the narrator is trying to discover things about herself.  We don't know how old she is, but she mentions having a job, so she's out of school.  She seems to live by herself, and doesn't have anyone in her life that she's close to.  It's just her and the tinies.

Right now she still thinks of her victims as no more than bugs.  She hasn't displayed any curiosity about what their lives might have been like before she took them or what they might be feeling about their captivity or ultimate fate.  The only true verbal exchange has been to compel them to snitch on their fellow captive who tried to escape.

The irreversibility of the size change gives the narrator an excuse to pretend that her victims cannot return to humanity, but of course they retain their humanity to themselves.  Whether it becomes important to the narrator to investigate this aspect of her victims remains to be seen.

Fetish-wise, I love bound tinies, particularly when they're bound in demeaning locations or positions.  I enjoy the increasingly cruel progression of the narrator's experiments, but I'd like to hear more about how the narrator feels about them.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2016 10:45 AM Title: Vore

really interesting plot so far. I like more cruel plots. keep it going! maybe putting them in her brothers cereals, or glueng them on a toilet paper, or feeding them to a bird.

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