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Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2021 10:19 PM Title: Gore

Welcome back among the living

Reviewer: Panzer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 7:09 AM Title: Gore

I really like stories like this. The dissonance in her head while she tries to make excuses for the tinies not being equal to her. Love it. Also the first chapter was especially cruel which was awesome to read.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 1:27 PM Title: Gore

Nice start; but you may want to clean up the plural-singular pronouns and verbs (e.g. "he" becomes "they" then back to "him")

It would be interesting if she put a tiny in the snot tissue she blew her nose into then blew her nose on top of them again.  Better yet, just stuff a tiny up her nose.

Keep up the story.  Very interesting shrinking process by the way, it has lots of potential as does this girl's character. 



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You've predicted the future!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2016 6:49 AM Title: Gore

A young sociopath, convinced of her non-humanity, commits atrocities in order to awake...empathy?  Guilt?  Disgust?  Any human emotion, really.

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