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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Cool story. Loved it. You should do another.

Reviewer: Notkent Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2017 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great piece of work. Short, sweet and to the point, how wee had the potential to be a much longer, in depth story too. I like the descriptions but think you could slow down the action scenes just a little to draw out the tension. Love the story.

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