Date: July 15 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
I absolutely love your story!! You are a fantastic author!! Please make more!
[Report This]Date: January 19 2020 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Ugh what a great story and an even greater writer! I really hope we can revisit these characters in a sequel because I’m so interested in where this could go! Like will Ella and Andrew ever come clean with each other? How will they live with themselves? What WILL happen after the summer ends?? I also wonder if the Hastings will help Ella and Andrew out as they leave home? And last but not least, what will happen to Susanne?? Because I'd love to see what Ella would do if she found her now… <.<‘
Anyways, thank you for this masterpiece of a story AND universe! So much fun to read (and so HOT)! lol
Date: August 29 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
I have greatly enjoyed this story. Well written with reminders of who everyone is. Ella is super awesome . Susanne was a cool story.
Loved it all,
Diesel
Date: August 27 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Loving the story, this was best chapter yet, lived the pace and the ending was fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes. Would love to see a spin off with mother and shrunken son, maybe with bbw grandma as occasional baby sitter.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Well, as Ella was clearly mentioned in the first chapter as being an adoptive daughter, what happened was not technically incest (according to the letter of the law). And your sensible use of that gimmick is the only reason reading this has been a half-guilty chapter. As for the (ahem!) climax having to be so abrupt? If you did it because you were starting to develop writer's block, then, yes. It's best to end this story where you did and save the infant ideas for maturation into a sequel.
In short? Thanks for sharing this with us.