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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

 

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Best story ever,hopefully chapter 12 is not the last.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, just working on the next one.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Ella really looks like seeking perfection in every way possible. It's even outright intimidating to think, at this young age, how 'superior' she is compared to common people and citizens. Not to mention Andrew now a this size, no wonder he keeps having these urges to see her as a Goddess.

I keep wondering how far Ella's obsession with her father truly go in her mind. Over all these years. She seems to see him above all others and everything else. Maybe all this thing about seeking perfection in every way, the awards, and such; may just be a way she thought to provide every need Andrew may need, even sexual. Not not let him go away from her life again, she feel this urge to give him everything, in a way he could be with her forever.

And now at this size, she may truly have what she wished all along, in a way he is already starting to see her as a Goddess, and maybe soon wouldn't be able to live without her. His mind won't be able to resist much longer if he keeps depending more and more on his perfect sexy daughter, and she takes more and more control of his life.

Just my thoughts.



Author's Response:

Amazing review! Thank you much for your thought provoking feedback. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Man! It sounds like this shrinking disease is quietly getting worse.

I just wish it would hit Susanne.

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