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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Wow I think I officially fucking love Ella! @,@ lol

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Hope Susanne finds a little bit of water and food in her stepdaughters room. Then her tiny husband.
Cool story,
Diesel

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Uhm! I think Ella meant to say "I'm NOT going to lose you again." A little unintended foreshadowing, perhaps?

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Incredibly erotic descriptions and the interactions, loved it so much.



Author's Response:

Cheers, I hope the rest of the story continues to please.

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