[Report This]Date: September 22 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Hey, man! I just read two of your stories (momma's boy and this) and I love your writing style I hope you release the sequel one day.
All the best! :)
[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Amazing story. Great character building. I hope you do continue!
Date: August 26 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
This story has some hot scenes, especially the hard core butt stuff. love that! I hope you write more, would love to see Lucy's dark side, getting her own tiny man and introducing him to her giant Irish ass! Along the lines of Beth's treatment of Brian!
good story!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Very nice addition to the story. It brightens my day when I see an update to this story.
It seems like Susanne is hitting a bad streak of luck. Poor her.
She was kinda mean, but now that she is small this will probably change.
It seems everyone except Ella is really mean to tinies, and they only realize they are so mean when it's too late and they are becoming tiny themselves.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Very good story!
Ella seems to be built like a tank.
Date: August 02 2016 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Yeah! He's an Australian-based gts fan, who particularly likes vore, and who used to regularly read and review, here. That is; until he got born again via the 7th-Day Adventists. Their strict religious doctrine evidently makes it a sin to even _read_ science fiction and fantasy based on Greco-Roman mythology (like some of the stories, here)!
Date: August 02 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
really well done! you've done a great job creating memorable characters and story hooks. I was wondering if you would be including more unaware interaction with ella as the protagonist (accidently/through forces beyond his control) isn't noticed by her or misplaced.
Author's Response:
Ooh, grand idea, I'll get on that for sure.
Cheers
[Report This]Date: August 01 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Good story, with much potential for greatness. If I may suggest, a few things I'd like to see are...financial/status humiliation (from rich as well as popular people), giant couples & cheating (with "better lovers", etc), promiscuous daughters getting back at daddy, and alienation plus degradation of the shrunken subject(s). Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review, I have already drafted quite a bit of the story but I'll try my best to work in these ideas.
Cheers
Date: August 01 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Fantastic writing, hugely absorbing.
Look forward to the big show starting up.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the encouragement and I certainly hope I can live up to your expectations in the chapters to come.