Date: August 27 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Loving the story, this was best chapter yet, lived the pace and the ending was fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes. Would love to see a spin off with mother and shrunken son, maybe with bbw grandma as occasional baby sitter.
Date: August 26 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
This story has some hot scenes, especially the hard core butt stuff. love that! I hope you write more, would love to see Lucy's dark side, getting her own tiny man and introducing him to her giant Irish ass! Along the lines of Beth's treatment of Brian!
Date: August 26 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Well, as Ella was clearly mentioned in the first chapter as being an adoptive daughter, what happened was not technically incest (according to the letter of the law). And your sensible use of that gimmick is the only reason reading this has been a half-guilty chapter. As for the (ahem!) climax having to be so abrupt? If you did it because you were starting to develop writer's block, then, yes. It's best to end this story where you did and save the infant ideas for maturation into a sequel.
In short? Thanks for sharing this with us.
Date: August 21 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Very nice addition to the story. It brightens my day when I see an update to this story.
It seems like Susanne is hitting a bad streak of luck. Poor her.
She was kinda mean, but now that she is small this will probably change.
It seems everyone except Ella is really mean to tinies, and they only realize they are so mean when it's too late and they are becoming tiny themselves.
Date: August 04 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation
Ella really looks like seeking perfection in every way possible. It's even outright intimidating to think, at this young age, how 'superior' she is compared to common people and citizens. Not to mention Andrew now a this size, no wonder he keeps having these urges to see her as a Goddess.
I keep wondering how far Ella's obsession with her father truly go in her mind. Over all these years. She seems to see him above all others and everything else. Maybe all this thing about seeking perfection in every way, the awards, and such; may just be a way she thought to provide every need Andrew may need, even sexual. Not not let him go away from her life again, she feel this urge to give him everything, in a way he could be with her forever.
And now at this size, she may truly have what she wished all along, in a way he is already starting to see her as a Goddess, and maybe soon wouldn't be able to live without her. His mind won't be able to resist much longer if he keeps depending more and more on his perfect sexy daughter, and she takes more and more control of his life.
Just my thoughts.
Amazing review! Thank you much for your thought provoking feedback.