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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

I have greatly enjoyed this story. Well written with reminders of who everyone is. Ella is super awesome . Susanne was a cool story.

Loved it all,
Diesel

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

Loving the story, this was best chapter yet, lived the pace and the ending was fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes. Would love to see a spin off with mother and shrunken son, maybe with bbw grandma as occasional baby sitter.

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Amazing story. Great character building. I hope you do continue!

Reviewer: gtsbooonda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

This story has some hot scenes, especially the hard core butt stuff. love that!  I hope you write more, would love to see Lucy's dark side, getting her own tiny man and introducing him to her giant Irish ass! Along the lines of Beth's treatment of Brian!

good story!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

Well, as Ella was clearly mentioned in the first chapter as being an adoptive daughter, what happened was not technically incest (according to the letter of the law). And your sensible use of that gimmick is the only reason reading this has been a half-guilty chapter. As for the (ahem!) climax having to be so abrupt? If you did it because you were starting to develop writer's block, then, yes. It's best to end this story where you did and save the infant ideas for maturation into a sequel.

In short? Thanks for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Moving Out

He should practice what he preaches. Wait till the next night to ask her opinion, first. Just the way he wanted Ella to ask _his_ opinion, beforehand!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning

Great chapter. Does Susanne survive?
Love this story,
Diesel

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Very nice addition to the story. It brightens my day when I see an update to this story.

It seems like Susanne is hitting a bad streak of luck. Poor her.

She was kinda mean, but now that she is small this will probably change.

It seems everyone except Ella is really mean to tinies, and they only realize they are so mean when it's too late and they are becoming tiny themselves.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Hope Susanne finds a little bit of water and food in her stepdaughters room. Then her tiny husband.
Cool story,
Diesel

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning

P.S.---Welcome back. Because, if nothing else, your work seems to have inspired Happy's KIMBERLY.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning

Sorry. But, I just _have_ to say it.

"Lucy! You got some 'splaining to do!"

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Church

I like Ella. Awesome character.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jody

Great chapter,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ella

Cool, loved the cigarette scene.
Awesome,
Diesel

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Best story ever,hopefully chapter 12 is not the last.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, just working on the next one.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Ella really looks like seeking perfection in every way possible. It's even outright intimidating to think, at this young age, how 'superior' she is compared to common people and citizens. Not to mention Andrew now a this size, no wonder he keeps having these urges to see her as a Goddess.

I keep wondering how far Ella's obsession with her father truly go in her mind. Over all these years. She seems to see him above all others and everything else. Maybe all this thing about seeking perfection in every way, the awards, and such; may just be a way she thought to provide every need Andrew may need, even sexual. Not not let him go away from her life again, she feel this urge to give him everything, in a way he could be with her forever.

And now at this size, she may truly have what she wished all along, in a way he is already starting to see her as a Goddess, and maybe soon wouldn't be able to live without her. His mind won't be able to resist much longer if he keeps depending more and more on his perfect sexy daughter, and she takes more and more control of his life.

Just my thoughts.



Author's Response:

Amazing review! Thank you much for your thought provoking feedback. 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Very good story!

Ella seems to be built like a tank.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Man! It sounds like this shrinking disease is quietly getting worse.

I just wish it would hit Susanne.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Beth

Ah! The wonders of s-f chemistry.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Uhm! I think Ella meant to say "I'm NOT going to lose you again." A little unintended foreshadowing, perhaps?

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