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Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 10:17 AM Title: Who Needs Socks, Anyway? (DianaSideStory1)

mixing tenses isn't allowed in writing, hope youll fix that in future stories of yours. the chapter naming are a bit confusing too. yet I enjoy unawre stories a lot. keep it up.



Author's Response:

Hey!

I never thought about how I mix tenses. Thanks for letting me know, but I don't think I'll worry too much about the nitty gritty grammar and syntax stuff, unless my writing becomes unreadable. I feel I'd rather have a story that contains interesting characters, understandable stories and fun size interactions. I won't stress the kind of writing that you'd expect in a formal essay, but my writing will always be gramatically correct enough to be read comfortably. (that doesn't exclude typos whenever they wind up heppening!)

But I'm glad you like the unware stuff.

Take care!

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