Reviews For Fate of a Thief
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Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 8:19 PM Title: 1.Last Chance

Wow such a good story pleas continue! Grey is the chosen one.

Author's Response:

Haha, chosen or just unfortunate. Anyway thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 8:05 AM Title: 7. Departure

This was an enjoyable part 1 of a large serie. Nice.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll strive to make whats to come just as good if not better. 

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 9:21 PM Title: 1.Last Chance

I absolutely loved this! I wish it was longer, but for the first submition, so far as I know I loved it. All I wish for was alittle more depth, and not just such an abrupt ending. I only add this so you could improve. Maybe nextime have an adventure or quest involving an giant :)



Author's Response: You caught me just before I left for a while. But I do intend to do more with this. The way I see it this is like a prologue of something bigger. I don't know how I will break up what is to follow or how long it will take me to complete it but I do intend more. Thank you for your kind words. I am always aiming to improve.

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