Reviews For Back Row Attack
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2023 11:35 PM Title: Point of Service

Not exactly the happy ending I was hoping for.  :-(

Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2023 8:39 PM Title: Point of Service

I feel like this whole story is a metaphor for...something? But I might just be too dumb to understand what, exactly. Abuse? Bullying? Social hierarchy? I dunno, the whole thing feels dreamlike in that some things make sense, while others don't. 

It's a strange story, and I'm pretty sure I don't understand what it was going for, but it's well-written and I liked it anyways lol. Good work!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! I hadn't embedded anything deep or significant in it: just a bunch of mean girls abusing a little man with their bodies for a bus ride. It's interesting that it gives the impression of a second layer of meaning, though. Thanks for your kind words!

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