Date: September 12 2017 3:56 PM Title: Overhand Pass
This is just SO HOT; I love it !
Date: October 19 2016 1:17 PM Title: Overhand Pass
I like how this has very quickly become more about the social dynamics between the girls and who gets to define what's funny or cool or fair. Aside from the corpulent descriptions of his tormentors, the tiny man's perspective has all but been forgotten.
It's almost as if these girls have done something like this before.
Author's Response:
You're right, in rereading the last few chapters... it has become much less about his experience. Rachael had an intimate exchange with him, even with his hapless nonverbals, but the other girls have no such concerns. It's all about their amusement, and... yes, they do seem awfully glib about it.
Date: October 18 2016 9:19 PM Title: Overhand Pass
Poor little guy. I hope he finds a way out of this hell very soon. I'll keep reading.
Author's Response:
You know, all we can do is stay strong, send him our thoughts and prayers, and trust that things must surely work out in the end.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 8:39 PM Title: Overhand Pass
The way these girls are going, it's going to take a miracle to save this little guy. Like, maybe, Frances being his granddaughter!
Author's Response:
Hey, yeah! A family member on the inside? That would definitely pluck his fat outta the fire!
Unless... she's attracted to him, seeing him all cute and little like that... oh, no! That could turn sordid very quickly!