Date: October 18 2016 3:22 AM Title: Tryouts
Great chapter. Loved her undressing him and her lack of concern over his feelings. You write really well.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm trying to picture the scenes very clearly and express them completely. I can't know for sure what's going through a young woman's mind, but I hope I'm not too far off.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2016 1:32 AM Title: Tryouts
Hey, where's the rest of this story? I'm thinking that Frances is going to cause some trouble. Anyway, while these events, as you relate them, cause some trepidation as I start to feel bad for the little guy, I can't help but think it's impossible to hold a shrunken man in the palm of your hand, and resist the urge to explore. After all, in my world, shrunken men are stolen all the time, and all manner of non fatal things happen to them at the hands of their curious thieves.
Please continue!
Author's Response:
I promise you, heavy drinking and much downtempo-listening are happening right this red hot second, and Ch. 3 will be up and online before I go to bed tonight. I'm very pleased you're enjoying this. With a little motivation, the following chapters should come more rapidly.
Date: August 27 2016 10:15 PM Title: Tryouts
Just awesome! Please keep writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I do plan to keep adding to it incrementally, just a matter of free time and discipline... but I will finish this one.
Date: August 25 2016 6:12 PM Title: Tryouts
Very interested to see what happens to this little guy. I hope it lasts a while before the final spike.
Rachael might not think she's one of the bad girls, but she's pretty clearly a predator. She's shy and so uncomfortable with sexual exploration that she's never looked at Internet porn, but she doesn't think twice about kidnapping someone and molesting them in public.
I'm also the kind of perv who's at least as interested in the middle-aged couple's married life. If the husband survives and they're reunited, I'd expect her to tease him about it for the rest of his days.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your response! Actually, the couple does have their own story. It could be as generic as them having survived any other shrink story with a happy ending, or I could write their prequel.
I was afraid it would sound unbelievable that a young woman would try to satisfy her curiosity with a tiny little man... but I knew someone like this, and that's how she did it.