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Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 11: Bringing the Family Closer

Good stuff, loved the contrast between the events going on with the family and Jack being inside Carly's boot. Loved the in shoe stuff as well, great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks much. There will be much more to come

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bringing the Family Closer

Great twist, looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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