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Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Hey there was wondering where you were. Hopefully you can update more often. Always looking forward to your stories.

Author's Response:

I'd like to update more also.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Great second chapter, I feel like you have once again captured both characters and their interactions with each other very well. Hoping to see more foot worship stuff from the coming chapters, you write foot content amazingly well, especially with these two, and I'd love to see more. As for bringing in other slaves/shrunken people for Carly, since other readers brought it up, I think you should just keep it Carly and Jack. For me, this series as a whole is about Carly and Jacks relationship and interactions with each other mentally, physically, emotionally, etc. They're the crux of the series, especially now that they have accept each other's positions in this alternate-verse story, so I don't think it would be a good idea to add other shrinkies. But hey, that's just my two cents, you're an excellent author and I trust where you will take this story. As always, can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I'm anticipating the next chapter being foot-related. As for whether we'll see Carly with other tinies, I won't necessarily say we won't see other characters appear in future chapters, but I agree that Carly and Jack are the crux of everything, and I wouldn't necessarily alter that just for the sake of it.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Welcome to the Matrix, little bro! Where you can’t begin to fathom a better existence...



Author's Response:

He picked the red pill.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Jack comes to his senses, only took an entire alternate universe.



Author's Response:

Nothing much.

Reviewer: muammar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Hello Jack! Do you plan to write new story «Time-Out 7» with my favorites Judy Stevens and Nancy Dugan?



Author's Response:

Sometime, yes, there will be a Time-Out 7. I don't know when yet.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Off to a lewd beginning.

Honestly, this is actually more enjoyable than expected now that Jack's completely gone off the deep end. Big Sister Diaries was harder to stomach because of Jack's despair in unsuccessfully fighting back, but now that this story is, in a sense, consentual, it's quite alright. Despite Carly finally mindbreaking him, Jack's acceptance is eerily comforting. As if, after all this struggle, everything turned out better than expected.

A great start to this big ball of smut.

Oh, and requesting more handplay, please~



Author's Response:

"Lewd" is one way to put it. This story is definitely much different from the others in that it will be essentially all consentual stuff. I'm hoping readers will want to ponder which reality is really "best" for Jack. Despite how messed up this one is, after all, he's objectively much happier now than in the fifth story. There will be more handplay soon.

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Your Life, Little Bro

Wonderful scene I admire your writing. I wonder if at any point in this story Carly will go all the way with Jack since you teased the insertion in 3. Also will we get to see Carly and Jack living on there own like a time jump? Carly working and Jack keeping her relaxed during the long shift. Anyways update soon. Can't wait to see our anti hero Carly keep Jack even threw her marriage if you go there.

Author's Response:

Can't spoil for now, but that insertion tease will not be forgotten in this story. I'm not quite sure how far ahead time will be moving in this, though I am interested in showing Carly and Jack living alone. Thanks for reading!

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