Date: July 05 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
What a fun idea for a spin off! It will be interesting to see how our broken protaginist will react not to things he use to hate, or will he still hate them? Personally hoping for mouthplay, been too long since we got to experience Carly's cronic halitosis and wonderful morning breath ~_~
Author's Response:
It's a good question to ask; there are some things that are still physically difficult for Jack to endure, although he's going to be looking on them with fresh eyes in this story, and plus, Carly has no desire to torture her brother any longer purely for the sake of it. There will indeed be mouthplay in this story. Hehe, I wouldn't quite say Carly has halitosis, but she does enjoy delaying brushing her teeth just to use it against Jack.
Date: July 05 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
It's so good to see an alternate ending to A Little Blackmail. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed Sophie's rescue but strangely I felt like the real peak of the story was just before Carly shrunk. Therefore, thank you for doing this and you have my support on this one :)
Author's Response:
I've heard a lot of people with feelings similar to yours about the end, so you're not alone there. Thanks for reading.
Date: July 05 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Really glad and grateful to see you follow through with this requested story. My favorite parts of this series were always the interactions between Carly and Jack as goddess and tiny footslave, particularly the loving, benevolent, indulgent, and slightly (or not so slightly) obsessed goddess Carly and Jack we saw this spin off come from, and I hope you will continue to focus on that loving goddess/slave dynamic between the two in this story. Glad to see you still active, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Those are some good adjectives you use to describe their relationship in this story; the tone of everything from their dialogue to their action is going to feel very different, and much more mutual, in this story.
Date: July 04 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Amazing, really cannot wait for the next chapters, genius like always.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
YYYYYYYEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
Author's Response:
Whoo!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Oh my fuck, this is actually happening. This actually, truly happening.
I never thought I'd see this come to life: a universe where Carly won. Honestly, I thought the slave situation couldn't get any more crazy after Arton's Dogs. Now, I'm not so sure.
I'm both terrified and excited for just what kind of things they'll do together. Or she'll do to him. I don't think my poor heart will take it. You're tearing me apart, Jack!
So, basically, this'll be some sort of a collection of all kinds of lewd things they do if Carly had won? How long will it last? As long as Big Sister Diaries?
I'm just bewildered at just what kind of things will happen here.
Will the main timeline continue right after?
Thanks in advance for yet another entry to this series.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Glad to hear you're enthused. Basically, yes, it's a collection of activities they can engage in now that Jack is fully on board with his enslavement. Hard to say how long it will last; right now what I have are concepts and drafts, and I'm not sure how many chapters it will translate to. And yes, there will eventually be an actual A Little Blackmail 6 picking up from the end of 5 in the "real" timeline.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
wow its great to see your takeing on this side of the story.I always wondered what could of happened if he gave in. Cant wait to see what you got.
Author's Response:
Hoping I can deliver. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
It is GREAT to see Carly back and hopefully this time with a tiny girl to rule over.
Author's Response:
Never say never, I guess. Hope you like the story!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Nice what if story. I gotta wonder if Carly will make use of the knowledge of how to shrink people.
Author's Response:
Good consideration to have, though it's worth noting she still doesn't actually know the chemical combination, nor did she ask Jack to share it with her yet.
Date: July 02 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Was not expecting you to post this for quite awhile, but im not complaining lol this should be interesting
Author's Response:
Hehe. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 02 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been
Oh wow I wasn't expecting this. This should be interesting on the alternate reality of what would have happened.
Author's Response:
I bet most people weren't expecting this for another year at least. Thanks for reading!