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Date: April 13 2018 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

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Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Would love to see this story continue. Been a big fan of this series and would still like to see more scenarios in this alternate reality. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

I wonder what would happen if Carly's friend tried to use Jack again. I mean, it seems Carly has become more possessive of Jack after he accepted his place as her slave in this timeline. 

 

I can help but feel she'd become jealous of another girl using him, even her friend.



Author's Response:

You're right to wonder this, and we may well find out before the story is over how she'd react now that things are so different

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

I am supprised that she has not used her brother as a sex toy by now.



Author's Response:

He himself is likely wondering this too

Reviewer: Tree Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Saya suka cerita anda, I have an idea carly has married and has family and her daugter use jack too .



Author's Response:

Always possible. For now, though, we won't be jumping too far ahead in time chapter-by-chapter

Reviewer: Baz_One Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Bravo. This is the moment I've been waiting for.

A majority of fiction here throws the word "Goddess" around, but rarely do we see deep-dive exploration into what that actually means, especially with your aptitude for detail.

It feels like we are entering another "no turning back" point, and I've got my popcorn ready for the next level.



Author's Response:

Thanks. The Carly-as-religion thing will definitely be explored more in future chapters

Reviewer: iHategiants666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Hi, I was a fan of Julia and have partially read A Little Blackmail, so I guess I'm asking... where does Julia fit into the timeline? Is it a long time after, or is it somewhere in between?



Author's Response:

Julia takes place between 10 to 20 years after the Blackmail stories. Though this particular story is non-canon

Reviewer: lolboy13 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

In my honest opinion, I prefer this outcome over the present one. I love the willingness of servitude not the torture of it. Where both parties enjoy themselves. Honestly, the other series scares me, but I suppose that's just not my cup of tea. Well, this is a magnificent piece. I love it, from the detailing and overall feeling of it, I can safely say I love this series. Gentle but assertive, kind and caring. I honestly love this. Please keep this up. I look forward to this next update



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. It sounds like a lot of my readers are more comfortable with this reality as well

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Hello Jacksmith. First off, you're certainly my favorite writer on this site, I readed the whole A Little Blackmail Saga, Julia and Best summer Never. Didn't get to like your other stories a lot even if I tried but what do you want, nobody's perfect. Given your pure talent for writing those stories, I wanted to give you the substrate for an eventual story or saga, that's up to you, that you could lean on.

The idea is that of an secretely evil grandmother who bullies her 14 year old grandson, without the parents knowing it, and, well, one day, he shrinks. Maybe it's a leap in the future and the grandmother in question is Carly Arton's granddaughter? Like some historical psycho-erotico-sado-incestual pathology and curse that goes trough the family? With your character-development capabilities and poetic dialogues you put in your art I think that would be really interesting given your story telling pure talent. Special thing here is I got the perfect character and illustrations you could put in the story or simply inspire yourself from, here it is; Sophia from feetoverforty, the most sexy, stunning and perfect giantess grandmother I ever saw:

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I demand of you, Jacksmith, to please at least consider this idea, I think that would give birth to one of the best giantess stories ever. ONCE MORE. From you. Thank you for all your work and keep going. See ya!

Sorry for my distorted english I'm french 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoy the Blackmail series. I am not a fan of giant grandmother stories, though, so I would probably not be the right author to write this.

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Are you or "Ackbar" planning on anything more on the Omega series? you did some great work on the hostage crises and it seemed there were sequels planned.

Author's Response:

Yes, there will be more, though I don't know when.

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

I enjoyed chapter 8 a lot. Was it the language? Not sure. Must have been, I was there with you through it all, you gave me enough pieces to assemble your vision of everything and it was embellished nicely as well. I still find it strange to read the name "Carly" attached to sweet dialogue. Yeah, the alternate universe factor of it is still poignant. Sweet! Thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I love a little bit of good embellishment. And yeah, I doubt it will ever feel normal for most readers to see Carly being sweet.

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Date: November 30 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

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Reviewer: Baz_One Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

I was going to say that if you aren't careful, people are going to start demanding another "What If" novella based on the "Forever Hers" Chapter 7 alternate alternate timeline when you finish this one.

But it occurs that the current one is sort of the necessary "conversion" point. If it had gone the Chapter 7 way, Carly wouldn't have gotten that taste of sadism that Jack was conditioned to need. There would be foot and mouth play, sure, but it would have been a more loving dynamic between relative equals, without Carly's deification.

I mean, if given a choice, would Jack really go back and do it over, consenting from the start? Or were those years under her heel necessary for each sibling to acknowledge just how much they were getting out of their respective roles, the one that God in his grace corrected for them? 



Author's Response:

I was glad to hear you bring this up, because this perspective is actually something I was wondering if people would catch onto. The what-ifs are up to readers, of course, but I have to agree with you that the current what-if is only able to happen the way it does (sadism, deification, etc) because of the difficult years the characters went through first. This chapter is meant to represent Jack's wishful thinking that he'd come around much sooner, but he can't quite see either that he is the way he is because of that time.

Reviewer: Boneguard Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Not necessarily by Carly... I see you want to show Carly's soft side... Don't really mean a lot of resistance... Maybe another Giantess... Maybe one story or even a part... Like he gets lost... Something of that sort. If that's not your plan... Then I will wait for the next series , when you continue with the first series. (^-^)... 

Peace!



Author's Response:

I see what you mean. I won't rule anything out (because I'm not totally sure where this will end up), but this story is 99% focused on the sick but gentle vibe.

Reviewer: Boneguard Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Waiting for Jack to get a punishment. Nice story though.



Author's Response:

You're probably reading the wrong story if you're waiting for that. ;)

Reviewer: ceezy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

Im hoping to see jenny again, and how jack will feel around her... and im also wondering if we might see other characters like chloe again? Maybe even new ones? But i doubt that though...ANYWAY, good work on this story, how often do you think youll upload and add onto this story?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure who else we will see in this story, though to be honest, Jenny is unlikely. I would like to post more regularly but I've been busy lately so we will have to see.

Reviewer: Baz_One Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

So I have a very important question.

What would have happened if Sophie had zapped Carly while Jack was...inserted?

Would Jack have also shrunk proportionately along with (and inside of) her, down to microbial size? Or would it have only effected Carly, who perhaps would have died when her vagina exploded once it reached a size too small to contain her brother?

Enquring minds want to know! ;)

 

As for the alternaverse, I'm very happy I didn't have to wait as long as other people did for previous chapters. I feel a bit spoiled. (And if I'm being honest, whether or not you like any of the concepts I've pondered here, I wouldn't be unhappy if they triggered ideas that have motivated you. If engaging you this way continues to spur this kind of productivity, I'm happy to oblige ;) )

Anywho, I know I mentioned being drawn to the "goddess worship" aspects of these stories, and how Part 6's King Kong Carly now drawing the attention of willing followers might be an interesting new path to take, but for these "What If" vignettes I'm not sure the idea of a shrunken Sophie would work for me.

I feel like having finally seen The Light, Jack would now be a Carly evangelist to Sophie, the reverse dynamic of the story proper where she was deprogramming him.

But as written, Carly's obsession isn't with having tiny worshippers so much as having a tiny worshipper that is her brother. Would she have much patience, or use, for a shrunken Sophie? I don't think the point of these chapters is to rehash Sophie trying to "fix" her cousin again, but is Jack so far under his sister's thrall that he'd go along with her getting rid of Sophie if she refused to kneel? Would he even want to share Carly with anyone?

Again though, with "A Little Blackmail," you have a talent for giving people the thing they didn't know they wanted, and if shrunken Sophie is in your plans, I'm sure it will be as excellent a turn of events as everything else you've done, so don't mind me.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Probably the second option. But I admit to not having imagined that scenario before to decide.

I'm hesitant to confirm/deny most of what you're guessing at in the future, but in particular, I'll say you're onto something in identifying exactly what Carly's obsession is. "Carly evangelist" isn't a bad way to put it; I expect we'll be seeing Sophie again in the alternaverse, and you're right, I'm not looking to rehash themes from the actual series, so we may be seeing something new with her, but maybe not in the way you're guessing. Again, I appreciate the thought you put into your reviews.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

......what kind of madness was that last review?
Well, anyways, good chapter :)

Author's Response:

Spambot creativity I guess. Thanks!

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Date: July 07 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

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